in the screen “Gulf of Gluttony - Town” the upper section leads back into itself when changing screens
Sketched out a fat Mars just cause. Put her in modern clothes cause they show off the FAT much better
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Question, will there be player as pred?
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Probably at some point
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i got a crazy rush of inspiration that compelled me to draw Something, Anything about this project, despite my subpar art skills, so i sketched out this image, then crashed off and decided to just clean it up a little and send it.
this happens often when i am compelled to draw, which is why i do not improve
Man… this sucks in retrospect, i better send it before i regret it
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Hah! This is incredible! I love everything about it, Hex just holding onto Mars, and especially Slug in the “Why is everyone so mean to me” pose.
Nice work! Keep drawing, it always makes my day to see fanart.
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decided to give drawing another go, this time, keeping it simpler, by only drawing one character, instead of additional ones in the background, that were more of an afterthought.
i drew Slug, but now that i look at it closer, it feels too much like i was merely copying one of the poses in the game, which is only kind of true, since i was looking at the images for reference, but tried to draw it by myself.
it bothers me now the way the hands look and the featureless lower clothes, i have to send this at once
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This is wonderful! You’re improving quickly, I love it!
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Well this came out of nowhere. Really fucking good, well done. A few too many “sorry”'s in that script for my taste but hey. Very good regardless. I have some feedback and I’m just gonna dump it here if you wanna read it.
Some of the jokes especially in the earliest part of the game fall flat cuz they were too random imo. i found myself craving more worldbuilding at that time, so up until you get the fourth party member the game felt a little incomplete. Maybe a map of the world on the wall someplace? Or a brief backstory for the MC and why they are where they are? Some intro narration would also be a good opportunity to introduce the player to Mars’ personality more directly. If you don’t want to go back and re-do stuff that’s already done I get that. Iteration can kill creativity.
“Sorry” every 5 seconds is annoying and kills characters’ ability to be judgmental with a straight face without needing to backtrack immediately on an opinion they could just “own” instead. Don’t be afraid to have characters be natural enemies and NOT resolve the conflict, for some tension to remain there. SB does this pretty well, as insults can be written to not be completely degrading and instead offer some slapstick-style comedy potential. If that’s not your writing style though, you don’t need to compromise your art just to try and be SB. And above all, I’ll reiterate my point from earlier- Don’t compromise your art for strangers on the internet! Pleasing everyone is another thing that kills creativity.
Another point is, characters don’t need to hold grudges over every little thing. Some brevity will simplify things and make it so you don’t have Slug digging up verbatim insults from hours ago in a straight-laced therapy discussion with Hex for the 10th time, when.. we could be doing more jokes instead. Or more importantly, more kink-related stuff! (the gulf chapter did a LOT better with this imo.) Or maybe my problem is I just got bored during those scenes, idk. They weren’t as funny as other parts. We don’t need to know how every character feels about every little comment made towards them, it slows down the script.
Initially when meeting Jiro for the first time, I was actually quite annoyed by her being mute. 20 minutes later, I was asking myself, “are we really still doing this bit?” But as I kept playing, you really did find ways to make her character funny and endearing and props to you for that. I just wanted to mention that.
More feedback::: please add more weight gain/stuffing/kink content in the earlygame! The time we spent with individual character before meeting the next one was jarringly short. I feel like there’s room to put at least one solid kink scene in for both Slug and Hex before we get Jiro. The characterization is okay for those two but there definitely needs to be more exploration into some crazy out-there fat girl predicaments. Also exploring the town of Greed, there should be more fat maidens strutting around! (or ‘jutting’ around, if you will.)
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I don’t know if mentioning this is gonna get me dunked on but in my humble opinion, you should pick a different tone for the political thing you did in the gulf area. I feel like those guards should have been more cartoonishly evil and dumb during the initial scene where they arrest the succubus, that way it’s more funny and less of a “politics here” thing. Plus it’ll open up the scene for more comedy imo. PLEASE do not misunderstand me here. I am not disagreeing with you politically. I just think the scene would work better with more cartoon evil and dumb shenanigans.
Not to belabor my review but I want to say again that the game is really good. My first instinct is to compare this to SB, but can you blame me? The influence is very clear, in a good way. And sure, late SB has insanely good writing by fat girl gaming TM standards, but even in SB, the first chapters pale in comparison to what came afterward in the many updates that game had. So take my suggestions with a grain of salt, since at the end of the day I’m just a guy who’s crazy enough to write a giant review on an rpgmaker game about fat girls.
You are free to take or leave anything you want from feedback. This game is YOUR art, not mine.
Just tried this out, and I’m absolutely hooked! I think the story is fun, and I’m really enjoying all the characters (Hex and Mars are best girls of course 
). And I’m enjoying their flaws and how the cast struggles with them while making an effort to better themselves. The plot itself is light hearted and fun but not too over the top which I throughly enjoy! And while I’m not the biggest fan of RPG Maker combat, you’ve done an excellent job with what you have to work with and the mini games are enjoyable. And the fact that you’re working hard to add your own art to the game is much appreciated! It adds a lot of personality to the characters.
Overall I’m eager for new updates! Although I do have one question, is weight gain planned for the main cast?
Heya! Thanks for the feedback! I always appreciate polite criticisms of the game : D
The jokes at the beginning of the game are definitely in need of some polishing, I was a bit aimless around then, so I could probably go back at some point to do that. I don’t want to overload the beginning of the game with narration, as it can kill some replayability when that happens, but I can see how that ends up with it feeling a bit empty.
As for the characters saying sorry, it’s mostly just me trying to portray how awkward they are socially, especially characters like Slug, who would likely overthink every little aspect of a conversation they had.
I enjoy writing characters, and this is my first time writing an actual game, so it can be a bit difficult to balance kinks, jokes, and character development : P
I’m glad you grew to love Jiro, she’s fun to write despite not needing to be written.
As for the gap between meeting characters, I’ve always had some trouble determining whether or not to add another event there, but I might, who knows?
The fat maidens don’t particularly fit with the theme of Greedy Gulch, but maybe there will be more in the Gulf of Gluttony,w ho knows.
As for the politics of the Gulf, I do enjoy having a somewhat more serious tone for more severe topics, but I’ll do my best to keep things light moving forward since I know the reason people are here.
Thanks for the feedback, I’m glad you otherwise enjoyed the game!
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Thank you! I appreciate the compliments. Almost everything drawn is drawn by me or a friend of mine, which is partially why new updates take so long to come out, but I try my best.
As for your question, there is some minor weight gain planned for the main cast.
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Guess whaaaat? New update soon! Should be releasing on March 21st! Just have to do some last minute bug-testing first.
This update includes:
-Vore
-A fat woman (Gluttony herself!)
-Some lore
-A new side mode, a casino!
-Tons of new art!
-Slightly revamped battle system.
-New characters!
Can’t wait to show it to you all!
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3/21/2026 - GLUTTONY UPDATE! You can finally meet Gluttony herself and continue with the Outcast’s adventures! Explore some new places, go on one(1) new side quest, play some new minigames and meet some new characters!
Update content:
-3 New Heart-to-Hearts
-Slight Combat revamp
-1 New Side quest
-TONS of new art!
-Slight NPC revamp, some NPCs in Greedy Gulch act more rude and will offer to sell you things, some NPCs in the Gulf of Gluttony will act kinder and offer you food
-A casino available in Greedy Gulch!
-VORE in the MAIN STORY!
-Lots more girls eating
I hope you all enjoy this update!
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Finally some vore in my fetish game
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Is the new update savegame compatible and if not are you able to upload a save at the point of new content?
I tried loading in some of my saves from the end of the last update and they aren’t showing as available - not sure if I’m making an error or if they aren’t able to be loaded in.
It should be compatible. Make sure to move the entire save folder from the previous games’ WWW file to the new one.
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Just wanted to stop by and complement this game a bit. I meant to do this months ago when I actually played it, but I totally forgot to until now. In short, I really liked what I played of this game, but not for the reasons I expected.
To be honest, there’s really not much in this game that satisfies me on a fetish level, at least not so far. It feels more like Some Bullshit in the sense that it’s mostly stuffing and belly focused, and even that is a bit sparse as far as I can tell. There’s nothing wrong with that, but it also isn’t really enough to get me all that excited about it.
However, I ended up liking this game’s writing, scene composition and humor, way more than I thought I would. There are a lot of really simple tricks here that were either just really charming or were flat out funny. Despite being unsatisfied by the fetish content, I had a smile on my face for most of the time I played it. One thing I especially liked was the yandere (sorry, I forgot her name) character’s tendency to just teleport places for comedic effect. It’s such a simple thing, but it works so well.
So yeah, good job. Might jump back in for this update and finish it this time. I’m kinda interested in seeing more, regardless of the fetish content.
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Haven’t finished the latest update, but I played the previous one a while ago, and I enjoyed it quite a bit. The art is cute and expressive, the writing is solid and pretty funny, and the plot has been interesting so far. The fighting mechanics are a bit awkward, and the equipment is honestly kind of confusing with all the things every item raises and lowers, when the store window doesn’t show any of that. And the game hasn’t quite hit the target with my favorite kinks yet, but the newest update may change that, and I still enjoy girls with big stuffed tummies.
It’s true that Slug’s overapologizing early on was a little annoying, and I think Hex can be pretty… invasive. Even if she technically backs off when told, she still keeps trying, which is not really “respecting boundaries”. But that’s fine, characters can have flaws, they don’t need everything about them to be completely and unconditionally likeable. And I can relate to Slug’s particular flaw myself, anyways. It’s just kind of exaggerated, but all their personalities are.
Finally, getting to beat the shit out of cops is always a plus in my book. Keep being awesome.