I’m just going to be echoing everyone else here really, but this is such a cool and well done game! Sure, it’s got the fetish elements but I really think this is the best I’ve seen them incoporated into a game’s story. It feels so much more natural and well written here then just “and then they got fat” like a lot of these games can be, not that there isn’t a place for that.
Loved the characters, was super engaged in the story and really intrigued at where the missionary’s plans go as well as the fate of the town, can’t wait for any further chapters! How long have you been working on this project, becuase this is already an impressive length just for chapter 1?
So glad people are liking the story! I was really worried it wouldn’t land for some.
I’ve been working off and on this for around 7-ish months I think? But I think a great deal of my process has been speed up compared to how I was working at the start as I learn how to use RPGmaker better and have a more defined idea of what I want from the story. Though a new speed bump might be me having to do more work in spriteing.
Hey I wanted to say I really like the way you write! Its a lot of fun, I decided to download the fixed version before continuing. Bad news though, as far as i can tell the new version is broken. (Could just be me but i did re download it to try to confirm) when I launch the game it comes up as a blank white window, fingers crossed its just a simple bug. I enjoyed what i got to play a hell of a lot though!
Just got that bug, Shatteraura realized I misnamed a file. If you can just renaming the file “Project 1” to “www” will fix that. Uploading a new zip now.
Unsure of what could be causing the save not showing up, Mightyhalberd just to double check it went to “www” Save" and then pasted in?
RPG maker has a master file called “globalsaves” that tracks what saves are in use. Start the game, make a save in the slot noted in the file, then paste over. Or, you can rename the file to one of the saves that you already have.
Ah, thank you Lurker that makes sense. Hopefully that can help you MightyHalberd, (by the way I thought I recognized that name, your stories are great on interactive)
I would first like to say amazing work it’s a different take but a fun one.
I only ran into a few problems but it’s nice to see that your updating the game as well looking forward to what’s next.
Lastly I don’t know if this is a bug or not But after the scene with the girls and the tea walking a rough with lily treated me as if I was still Sebastian I’ll check again later tonight (I accidentally skipped over the little bit of dialogue at the end so no clue if that was the case) but if so I just wanted you to know
I’ve had this same bug. If I re-entered the church: it seems to think that we’re back to Seb prior to the search for Dina. and breaks.
Overall, excellent premise, good writing, and likable characters. The only complaint is you need a proofreader, but that is hardly essential at this stage.
I just tested it with both last night’s build and the most recently uploaded, and both of them stuck on that black screen for as long as I left the window open - several minutes each. Looks broken to me.
Just completed the game, and i gotta tell you, this is definitely a welcome surprise, while admittedly slow, you kept an air of intrigue throughout that kept me playing
The fact that you are missionaries for gods of abundance and happiness genuinely making the town better is amazing, the fact that there clearly is something else going on with the missionaries makes me want more to the story. You kept a balance of light (Helping a town on the ropes and saving them from parasitical advenurers) and the dark (One of the people you “help” being the leader of a slaver gang and a child having frozen to death in the snow) which is rare for stories to do let alone a (to be blunt) porn game.
My only complaint is the best one i can have, super sad it ended when it did, and i want more from these characters and world, i want to show all the love of The Niss.
TL;DR: Love what you did with this concept and want more from it, i eagerly await the next update.
Hmmm, not quite sure on that one. Do you mean the charcter sprite changed to Sebastian or is it him in the text boxes? Can you say more on the specific time it happened as if I can’t find a fix Ill offer a new save.
Sorry to hear that. I’m not really sure what to make of that one. I don’t think it’s happened to anyone else thus far but I’m hesitant to say it’s a problem on your end as there shouldn’t be any reason for your computer not to play scrolling text.
For now here is a save after that point if you are still interested in playing. If it freezes again shortly after you meet the adventure siblings again then it is another scrolling text error.
(Oh and there was an issue before with transferring saves, basically that save should work as long as there is an existing Save 2 it overwrites. )
Thank you for the kind comment! So glad you liked the story. Intrigue and mystery to the missionaries was definitely what I was going for to balance out the slower pace of some of the story.
I hope I don’t keep you waiting too long for the next update!
