Firstly, I wanted to congratulate you on making a really riveting and well-written game! I went in with zero expectations and ended up so engrossed that I finished the game in one shot! I have to preface that I am probably not your target demographic (since my fetishes are more on the dude side of things), but I have to say, I’m really glad I gave your game a shot (plus there’s enough boy belly sprinkled in to keep me engaged other than the story haha)! Honestly, I don’t think I’ve ever played a WG game that put so much love and effort into world-building! I’ve actually became quite attached to the world and your characters (especially the ones mentioned below), and I can’t wait for the next update!
In terms of kink, I have only one word: Mauve. Gosh, I love this pathetic Beastial. He’s such a cocky rude bastard that I loved seeing him brought low by the protagonist trio and fattened up for L’s pleasure. Every time L’s dialogue mentions it’s time to play with the Hog, I immediately create a save file because I know it’s going to be great! I really enjoyed the scenes with him thus far and your descriptions are always a joy to read! I’m looking forward to Mauve being toyed with and humiliated further, like L using her Voice to forcefeed him to his absolute limit and denying him release while he begs and whines. Also, I believe L threatened Heather that she would peg her brother, so I hope that becomes a reality at some point (or L can transform into Sebas to play out her gay doctor fantasy instead and give Heather’s brother a good pounding haha).
One thing I’d like to see is Mauve’s interactions with other characters. L got to have some dreamnovel adventures with Heather, so I think it might be fun to see Sebastian do some tests with Mauve, with all the sarcastic feedback about his weight as he had done with Hog’s sister, and the player would get to read the test notes at the end with all those juicy measurements and progress comments. Mauve might even open up more just like his sister and we can hear him talk about his past, since currently most of his back-story is told to the player indirectly through Heather. It might be neat to also have the contrast of Heather and Mauve following Sebastian out of grudging respect whilst obeying L out of fear. Plus, I like the thought of Sebastian doing his best to help out the Beastials just like his wife did. But yeah, sorry, I digress! Long-story short: Mauve is my fave! Hope there’s more of him on the horizon!
In terms on non-kink, Sebastian and his back-story are really gripping. The explanation with how elf culture works was so interesting to me! I was not expecting a WG game to tug at my heart-strings, but Sebastian, and to a lesser extent L with her parents, had me emotionally attached. Jury is still out over how I feel about Gretel since I feel there’s gonna be much more to learn about her! Also, despite fanboying over Mauve’s kink stuff earlier, I also really enjoyed the non-kink scenes you added between the Beastial siblings. Heather demanding to know what’s happening to her brother and refusing to give up on him was really sweet. Then the scene where they were finally reunited and Heather gave him all that emotional support. So touching! Doesn’t detract from that fact that I want Mauve over-stuffed like a balloon, but still, very touching. Part of me genuinely wants to see Beastial siblings released and given a second chance amongst the villagers, but another part of me just wants to see pounds and pounds of fat added to their frames! Only great character building and writing could trigger such a kink crisis in me, so great job haha
As for what I’m hoping for next (other than more Mauve), I’d love to see the trio fatten up more guys. The little scenes we got were always a treat, like I really enjoyed L’s scene with Kale (hm, another dumb young braggart who got his comeuppance by getting fattened up – maybe I have a type?). But I think there are a few other contenders that I’d like to see. I think Ezzy would be really interesting for the protagonists to “assist” in gaining weight (if/when he joins the main storyline!).
Other characters I thought were cute but are way too random to realistically expect are probably: Kale (I felt bad that the last thing L says to him is that she hates him, even if it gave him a boner!), Timond (especially considering he’s in an endless dream at the moment, but I thought it might be fun to fatten up an elf, other than Sebastian in L’s fantasies) and that one coal merchant who came to the inn after the snowstorm and currently has no background or name (I never said I wasn’t shallow!).
But gosh, this comment went on way longer than I had planned! Sorry about that! Suffice to say, you created a wonderfully-written game with a great world! And the kink aspects are so fun that even for me as a male WG fan, I was hooked even during some of the female WG parts! So I just wanna say, keep up the great work and I’m looking forward to what you come up with next!
