Alright well, after spending way too much time trying to beat Vernon, I finally gave up. I got 2 away from winning, but my luck is trash and I’m just wasting my time at this point lol. That said, I did have a lot of time to think and write down my thoughts while I was playing, so here is what I think could be improved (most are pretty nitpicky but good for polish), and what I think it really great so far.
I would love to see some visual indicators, like a gage or something, for both Weight and Energy. Maybe a scale or the outline of a body that fills up for weight, something along those lines. As it stands, visually, it’s a bit dizzying to take in all those numbers next to each other, but that’s a small thing.
The status in the menu should be present tense instead of past tense. It just feels a bit odd for it to be in past tense.
I would maybe try upping the saturation for the darker protagonist skin tones. They look pretty grey, but I know sometimes upping the saturation doesn’t look good either, so that might be something you have to play around with. The NPCs with darker skin look fine, so I’m sure the protag’s skin options were an afterthought, so it’s fine for a placeholder for now I think.
Would also be nice to have some glasses options for the protagonist. I would say outfit options, but that seems more obsolete since you grow out of them pretty easily, and it’s way more effort than glasses would be.
When you skip and there’s only one card left to be drawn, the deck goes down to 0 and doesn’t refill until the next round. I don’t know if this is on purpose or not but personally I think it should refill right away.
Some bgm would also be nice too! There’s a fair amount of royalty free stuff you can use.
And to round that out with some positives:
The bouncy/jiggly animations look great!
I love the diversity in the character designs so far. Most male weight gain games on here are furry, and on the rare chance they’re not, a lot of weight gain art in general is very white, so it’s nice to see other people as well.
The sounds effects are great! Very clear and crisp audio, it’s a nice touch. The audio quality in general is very good.
Overall, I can tell you’ve put a lot of work into this, it’s gotta be one of the best male-centered stuff on this site.