Oh even for Trista! I was curious what her deal was, as she does visit bunny bites, and you can talk to her but, nothing yet. so great to hear that’s done too!
Seeing what you did with Bonnie’s story, and hearing there’s overlap in what her story is and what I suggested, I’m pretty sure I’m going to love it, so I’m actually very excited to hear that! Can’t wait to see how it turns out, thanks for the great work and please, keep it up!
@Krodmandoon All Katrine content will be replaced in the next update.
@JustChris The portrait in the stats screen will change to the selected character with the current weight gain stage in the next update. I have no plans for a gallery yet.
I’ve played it through now, and I’ve got to say…
Bonnies last event was the absolute sexiest thing I have ever seen! Holy sweet mother of everything! I created a separate save point in the beginning of it just to be able relive it over and over and over again! The clothes, the body, the everything! I’m in love with Bonnie… 
[this place has shitty rules so I’m checking out. Enjoy the anti-AI circlejerk mods.]
Hey, thanks for the honest feedback.
In terms of clothes i am working on collaborating with more creators to offer more types of clothes without violating creator licenses. Hopefully i can offer a wider array of clothes in the future so i can switch out clothes more often when the characters become bigger.
The Cayenne bug will be fixed in a couple hours from now with a bugfix.
when will the game be free?
0.05 will get a public release in februari.
The Android build for Fattening Career 0.05 is now released on Patreon.
The forum has an automatic translation feature, so you should be able to write your comments in chinese and we will be able to translate them.
原来还有这种操作，我以为我的翻译是浏览器自带的，原来论坛有翻译功能，我刚刚知道。
我搞了好长时间才弄清楚怎么注册，论坛其他的功能还没有学会哈哈哈 
Your game is really fun. I like your game very much. Although my English is not good, I really like your game. The gain in the game is really just right (because my English is poor, I can only use the translator)
巧了，郑兄莫非和我是一个地方的? 
Are you from China too?If so, give me your contact information (QQ or WeChat)
Referring to someone as Brother Zheng just sounds so cool
I think in general there could be more dialogue added to how characters feel about their increase in weight, obviously in Bonnies story events thats being explored, Daisy is a no brainer and so are Leanne and Luna,
Since most stories are written by writers its not really feedback for you, but it seems (at this moment) some characters might mention increase in weight once, but it never goes deeper then that,
I think Bunny Bites is the best example, at some point in their gain they might say “Do you think I’m over doing the weight gain thing?” And Marie having the amazing line “Never thought I’d be the one getting fat” But they never really talk about it any further, I wonder how Amber feels about going from slim to round, How does Marie feel about each stage as someone who enjoys seeing others gain, how does Lisa feel about it? Is she enjoying it? Did she hate it? Or can she simply not help it due to a “accidental order” scheme?
So in the future I’d really love to see characters refer to their weight outside story moments in different ways, with Bunny Bites you could even have them tell you they needed a bigger uniform size again!
This way story moments could hit harder when characters would have an arc from complaining and feeling shitty about their increased weight, to ending up loving it! Bonnie for example, in story moments will tell you alot about how she always would have loved to eat whatever she want but didn’t want to lose her figure, but now she does, having that change in mindset reflected in conversations outside those events would be awesome!
That would even make the scene where a character calls her out on her weight gain and her ignoring it make even more sense as we’ve seen her grow (pun intended) convident about it!
Still I will keep saying it, love what your doing with this game its great and just keeps getting better! Thanks for making this game!
Just finished the newest update I’m really interested in the Luna story line and has to be my favourite so far but looking forward to the others nurses story line but keep it up and looking forward to the next update!
The update was amazing. I can really appreciate you going back in and filling in story and bits that need to be updated to a more “complete” state as development goes on. The quality and story for each of these last few updates keeps rising and I love to see it. Where each story leaves off each time makes me all the more curious to see the next update and the adding in of more detailed renders and effects like fluids, veins, and wetness are noticeable improvements. As such I have some bugs, errors, and typos to report as well as some of my general thoughts or suggestions for this great update.
When taking Daisy’s class you get to pick if you want to learn about “calories” or “terminology” as a choice. The first time this choice came up I chose terminology. When the choice came up a second time I could pick terminology again, and it’s the same dialogue as the first time I chose it, feedee, feeder, gainer, etc. Terminology doesn’t go away as the dialogue repeats even after choosing calories one time.
There are scenes when we are first meeting a girl that has her dialogue coming up as she is speaking to us where we as the player can see what their name is. This is before they ever introduce themselves. As far as “inconsistencies” go this is probably boarding on nitpick territory 
but it just a thought that comes up since you have been implementing similar stuff to this in other scenes. In certain scenes that come up if we don’t know or can’t see who is talking, the dialogue will indicate an unknown or generalized name for a girl. I think this makes sense and is a nice attention to detail (although as priorities go obviously low). Katrine is an example when we meet her while walking she doesn’t introduce herself until we are already at Bunny Bites. But we know what her name is before that because of the dialogue box. Some examples but probably not all: Trista at the gym when we first meet her she doesn’t introduce herself right away, Bonnie at the Sugar Shop, Amber at Bunny Bites, First time talking to Luna at Bunny Bites. I think it’s a nice touch and attention to detail to keep the names unknown or generalized until the girl introduces herself. Hopefully comes across as helpful and not nitpicky as it was something that was only thought of recently because of some later scenes or introductions you have implemented.
The image that displays on the next day tick over where the MC states what day it is, example: MC: “It’s Sunday.” was using the previous image from Bunny Bites (having worked there all day with Lisa on Saturday) instead of the MC’s house. So Lisa’s final image from cleaning up at BB in my case. Not game breaking or a huge deal by any means but definitely not intended. This so far has happened in stage two as well, and I assume is a bug that is going to happen at every stage.
This same bug happens with Amber’s bar event and ends on her last image at stage two (giving a kiss to the MC) and then the day rolls over (to being sunday) with it not being the MC’s house but still the bar and Amber. Where the MC states that “It’s Sunday.” So from here I would guess this happens for all BB girls. (also happens at stage three)
Daisy will have dialogue that plays during each class that she asks “what should we learn about today” even if there are no options to choose anything which result in the next image and dialogue just jumping into measurements or showing off and feeding her. This dialogue shouldn’t play unless there are choices to pick or maybe an indication from here that there is no new lesson planned for today so she’s going to jump into the other parts of class.
The “taco” unlock event for Daisy happens before she gets to weigh herself but the dialogue after she’s finished eating tacos states, “I’ll have to pick up another bag on the way home. That’ll be all for today. See you all later!” Right after there is the image of Daisy eating a taco with three advances needed to be made in order to advance to the next dialogue. “Now that that’s out of the way, please get out your notes. It’s time to measure.” Following the scale and measurement part of the class.” (stage seven)
“Luna is only too happy to eat all of the extra food that you give her as she chows down.” This is from the BB “accidental” ordering. The image used still shows one burger left. It’s the same image used if she doesn’t finish. (stage 2)
You can visit Daisy at home when she reaches stage eight, before ever seeing the classroom event where she hands you a paper with her address on it. Unlocking Daisy’s house should only happen after this event and not being able to visit before hand.
During Leanne’s stage six event her dance or exercise option chosen by the player will have an empty dialogue box left up during both animations. This animation is also unskippable. And it takes quite a few (I think maybe six clicks) advancements before you can skip to the next screen once the animation is done.
Lyn stage nine house event still uses the old MC model. (I’m sure this is known and looking to be fixed but mentioning it just in case)
When Lyn comes into BB she is not able to have the options to make her food normally, fattening, or the “accidentally” orders.
“Helping Lyn clean up the empty bowls, I head home with my thoughts lingering on her impromptu kiss the entire way there.” During Lyn’s stage ten home event the image that is displayed with this corresponding text has a floating ice cream to her right. And the ice cream sundae that she was eating in the event is behind her floating near her hips.
During Bonnie’s stage seven home event when you can choose “Lets have sex together” while she is on the couch. There is a blank dialogue box on screen.
During Lyn’s stage eleven event the phone text gets cut off on the bottom, and the scroll bar graphic is across the entire screen from top to bottom outside of the bounds of the phone.
MC: “The Big Bunny Challenge? Are you sure?” The next line that plays upon advancement is, “Are you sure? That’s our most expensive item on the menu. I should warn you it’s quite a difficult challenge and you only get to eat for free if you finish the whole thing.” I think the first “Are you sure?” should be dropped after the “The Big Bunny Challenge” line. But whichever one makes sense to not have the MC repeat themselves unintentionally.
I only noticed this at stage fifteen of visiting Daisy at her home (I am unsure if it occurs at any other stage). When visiting her and feeding her one of the images for her stomach growing larger is reversed in order so when that dialogue plays the next advancement actually has her get less stuffed.
Krod’s Daisy bug example.zip (159.2 KB)
If Bonnie is the benchmark for the level of quality and care the rest of the stories and events will be when things are more filled in and finalized for some earlier stages and content. Then I think things are headed in a great direction. The story that has been added and reworked for the girls over the last few updates has been great and the added images, animations, and fleshing out some of the other activities are all a big improvement. It’s really nice to see you go in and fill in some of those points and placeholder things as development has continued.
Bonnie’s content and story is amazing. I love that the update gave me a lot of what I was hoping would happen with her. The sex scenes are great and gave me a lot of what I was hoping would happen with Bonnie. Bonnie’s ever growing stuffings and gluttonous appetite is great and holy shit she is cute as shit to begin with but her body and size are looking amazing as she grows. I really love the implication of Bonnie being into her size and stuffing herself to the max and that she likes to hear horny/dirty talk about her gluttony and ever growing size. I hope there will be more instances of this being included in different parts of her route as it continues.
Bonnie was already leaning towards being my favorite character and while this update (and the past story ones) having given her a run for her money. I think this one made me feel all the more that Bonnie is best girl.
The inclusion of Rebecca is interesting and I like what little we have seen of the character and I’m interested to see where it goes from here. The thought I had about Rebecca and Bonnie as I was playing through was as much as they are kind of introduced as opposites. Bonnie being a more sweet, shy, gentler girl. Rebecca is prickly, in your face, and domineering. (Of course Bonnie is changing and coming out of her shell more as the stages go on thanks to the MC even going so far as to stand up to Rebecca). They both love sweets and chocolate. And I wouldn’t mind seeing Rebecca and Bonnie becoming closer and sharing a common bond through the MC. With the likely chocolate, stuffings, and their more gluttonous behavior. They are both interesting characters and I look forward to seeing where their story goes.
I love Luna’s story and where this update has indicated her route will go. Her personality and appetite really get shown off here and I feel it all fits really well with how she was portrayed in earlier updates. I love Luna’s drive to grow her breasts and the stuffing and sex scenes are great. I look forward to more as her story continues.
The other nurses are all cute and unique in both personality and looks. I think Natalie and Sally are my favs out of them but they are all great. Natalie is adorable and damn Sally is always firing out those gluttonous lines of dialogue and I love her for it.
The Bunny Bites girls content is great. They all have dialogue from stage two+ that indicates they are finishing some food while at the counter when you come to relieve them from a shift. I would love to actually see an image tossed in that shows them eating maybe progressively larger things or amount of food as stages go on.
The same thing for working with them on the weekend we get to see a bit of a girl before we open BB and it has them quickly making a burger. Maybe as stages progress after we have the “talk” about them having something before the shift we don’t see said girl for a bit and we go to find where they are and they are in the backroom/kitchen with food stuffing themselves before BB opens. This would be a nice way to have the food and stuffing increase over time and show the girls larger appetites and how much more glutinous they are becoming. Maybe turns into a nice stuffing and quick sex as the MC becomes sexually involved with the girls.
I love the BB content and look forward to the completed Marie, Lisa, and Amber closing events.
During Luna’s stage five event with all the drug test subjects eating in the breakroom. (?) There is some dialogue that indicates that all the girls eat until “…each one of them look so stuffed that they couldn’t possibly eat another bite.” You show us this type of image for the later stage seven event with the girls at their second stage sizes. It would be cool to have an image here showing the girls stuffed like in that later event, during the stage five one and not just see it explained in dialogue. Either way this is a great scene and I love the route that Luna’s story is taking from here.
The Daisy pool scene is great. It would be cool to see the MC have events for Daisy that take place outside of the school as well, maybe something that happens in between main stage events or even repeatable events. But I like interacting with her outside of school as well and the first one (outside of going over to her house and there’s not really any “story” that happens in these repeatable events) really happens at stage twelve. Daisy feels less in a relationship with the MC than the other girls because of how her and the school is structured and we don’t get to spend one on one time with her. It would definitely help to have some events where they get to interact and deepen a connection between them and give us a look at Daisy as a person. I like her and her content and think it’s well written but the focus is definitely on her being a teacher to a class with a goal of her own. And if there is meant to be more of a relationship between her and the MC (like the other girls) I think content outside of the school would allow you to show off who Daisy is.
I love the story and a lot of the new added dialogue really goes hand in hand with the renders for me. As a personal preference dialogue and variation as stages go on really help to make things less repetitive. I would say a lot of the story bites feel fine in that regard along with the certain activities. Now a lot of it is WIP so things are likely to change but an example. The BB girls stuff is nice to have some dialogue to follow the renders that have been great so far. And while it is largely still WIP and there are activities and sets of dialogue missing. If they happen to say the same sets of pieces for too long that feels a bit too repetitive to me to match the nice size increase we get each stage. Or the general dialogue to BB activities for other girls. I love that some of them have things to say like Bonnie that she comes in pretty regularly and changes her dialogue based on events or things in the story relevant to her and the MC. It would be nice to see this show up in her “accidental” feast dialogue as well she has a lot of gluttonous aspects and her and the MC are into it and her growing size within a point in the story and it would be nice to see some of the dialogue reflect this in different events as her size increases.
This obviously applies in many different places Luna’ s sex scenes at her house for instance. As more stages pass from the time we get to have sex with Bonnie the dialogue will be more repetitive the longer it doesn’t have any change. And since Bonnie asks the MC to talk dirty to her, things like that are probably an easy way to make the events feel more mixed up like how the renders do as sizes and outfits change. To me this would be the best way to compliment the nicely done renders and scenes. Bonnie saying that she feels like the MC is doing this on purpose (referring to the mixed up orders) definitely is the type of dialogue that I think is great and mixed up but belongs much earlier in her sizes by now the MC and her are both out in the open about their desires and wants and enjoy things equally.
How often should dialogue be added on to or have more variation is gonna be a subjective thing for repetitiveness. But I would say story stuff felt great, repeatable feedings, repeatable sex scenes (not Bonnie) and the BB girls repeating dialogue by 7 to 11 stages felt like too much. I think maybe a 3 to 4 stage thing felt normal to me. That is when Bonnie’s new repeating sex scenes (great by the way) felt like some added change to dialogue would feel good right about then. But honestly that is obviously just my opinion. As you and the writers are hard at work filling in gaps and continuing to update WIP stuff.
My favorite things were by far the story bits that had been added and the dialogue that acknowledges world and story changes really helps flesh out the characters and game.(This might be BB dialogue that changes as stages go on, or the like secret mastermind Daisy feels like as she recommends going to the library for just the book that the MC needs, Bonnies shop dialogue updating over time, would love to see more stuff like this and maybe even more often) Bonnie was by far my favorite but she is the most “complete” I feel and has more story than other girls. I loved the introduction of Rebecca and I’m really interested to see where their stories go. I loved Luna’s content and where her story is indicated to be headed and the other girls introduced were interesting and unique from each other. The feeding and sex scenes were great hope to see some more and I really like having a place to measure and weigh out the girls. Natalie and Sally being my favorites. Daisy’s content is well written and I love the updates to her route and images, she still feels the most distanced from the MC (compared to other girls) and their relationship and who she is I would love to see explored in some more events outside of the school. Lyn’s stuff is great (not new) but I am interested to see what happens with her story and I would like to see more of her in mini events or just included in some of the other things. Her content can move pretty fast but she really doesn’t get much time in random events or stuff as some of the other girls. BB girl’s updated dialogue and workings was really nice. I can’t wait to see it more updated and filled in.
The BB girls in particular felt really hard to see random content for them closing or them coming in to eat. I often missed (sometimes multiple) stages of those events. It would be nice if maybe one of the options added to the “continue work” part of BB was the MC inviting a girl down to come and eat on them or something. It would be nice if we got to pick (if we wanted to) one of the random walk in’s (per day?) This way you could target certain girls if you wanted to progress stages or maybe see their content for that size. With the most recent update there are going to be quite a few girls that can come into BB. I wouldn’t mind if the same thing was added maybe once every week/weekend for closing with a certain girl.
A thought occurs. When the MC goes to apply for a job at Bunny Bites we get to meet two out of the three girls (no Amber) might make sense to have either a scene happen for the first time working that has all the girls there and they introduce themselves or have Amber appear an introduce herself in some way when the MC asks for a job. In my playthrough my first work shift after unlocked work was with Amber and it was then I realized I would have no reason to know who she is as a new player or from the MC’s perspective. If any of that is too much work adding in a piece of dialogue that plays the first time the MC meets Amber that has her say something like “Oh, hey you must be the new guy we didn’t get a chance to meet last time, my name’s Amber.”
During stage ten Bonnie’s event at home the line “What is the matter is my piggy getting to fat to be on top?” There really isn’t any kind of response from Bonnie here; it feels like there should be some narration/dialogue from her as she and the MC go to change positions.
Lisa’s stage two scenes until size seven(?), when closing with the MC at BB. She has an image that is used (in stage one it’s when she asks the MC if they can keep a secret because she is bi) where no dialogue comes up and it’s pretty much just an image that is skipped through. Might be nice to add some dialogue here as I would hate to remove the image but as it stands it’s just Lisa looking inquisitively at the MC with no dialogue. Maybe Lisa is asking the MC about Marie and Amber here as she wants to know if they have said anything about her (since she likes both of them and wants to get with them).
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MC: Oh, its a good looking lady!. Change “its” to “It’s”.
MC: It definitely got my attention. But is this even allowed? I don’t want you getting fired over his. Change “his” to “this”.
“And her body looks slim and fit” Needs period.
Trista: “Welcome to my humble gym, feel free to come here as often as you like I dont charge for membership or anything like that.” “dont” needs an apostrophe. A period should be added after “like” and before “I” to make a new sentence.
Lisa: “It has been incredibly busy lately, and we are super short staffed” Needs period.
MC: “Hey thats the woman i have seen working out when i leave school.” Sentence needs a few fixes “thats” to “that’s” and capitalize the two “I”s.
MC: “She looks exhausted, should i talk to her?” Capitalize the “I”.
Katrine: “Yeah, i just need to eat something.” Capitalize the “I”.
Katrine: “I could eat a burger or 2” change “2” to “two” and add a period. I would suggest maybe making this “I could eat a burger or three” as well since it would play a bit more into the next scene (assuming you keep the intro scene for Katrine the same that has three burgers for her at Bunny Bites) and show us a bit of Katrine personally and appetite (and the reason she was exercising to be begin with). This might not make sense if you are redoing Katrine’s scenes.
Katrine: “Damn, i really needed this.” capitalize “I”.
Katrine: “Its so good, im katrine btw” change to “It’s so good, I’m Katrine by the way.”
MC: “Nice to meet you katrine, i am playername.” change to “Nice to meet you Katrine, I’m playername.”
Katrine: “Yeah, i love eating food and dieting is nothing for me so i just workout to lose all the calories i eat.” Change to “Yeah, I love eating food and dieting is nothing for me so I just workout to lose all the calories I eat.” Capitalize the three “I”s.
Katrine: “Before i started working out i kept on piling fat and at some point even weighed 110kgs.” capitalize the “I”s.
Katrine: “Right now i weigh 80.0, got 34G cup breasts which measure 40.6inches.” fix this to “Right now I weigh 80 Kgs, got 34G cup breasts which measure 40.6 inches.”
Katrine: “My butt measures 40.9inches and my waist measures 28.3inches.” The “inches” need to be spaced from the numbers.
Katrine: “I dont think i can complain about my current body, but maybe losing another 5Kg would be nice.” fix this to “I don’t think I can complain about my current body, but maybe losing another 5kg would be nice.”
Katrine: “haha yeah, i dont mind though.” Change to “ laughs Yeah, I don’t mind though.”
“Katrine: “Speaking of working out, im gonna go and run some more.” capitalize “I’m” and add an apostrophe.
MC: “Did she just eat 3 burgers?” change “3” to “three”.
“What should i do?” general option comes up for the MC when at home. This needs a capital “I”.
MC: “Hey, its Katrine.” change “its” to “It’s”.
MC: “Hey Katrine, im glad to see you again.” change “im” to “I’m”.
Katrine: “Well in that case, we should maybe get to learn each other a bit better.” change “learn” to “know”.
MC: “I would love to, but im new to working out here.” change “im” to “I’m”.
Trista: “I would like to order a hamburger and 1 slice of pizza.” Change “1” to “one”.
Librarian:” “I would like to order a hamburger and 1 slice of pizza.” Change “1” to “one”.
Caroline: “I would like to order a hamburger and 1 slice of pizza.” Change “1” to “one”.
Daisy: “ “I would like to order a hamburger and 1 slice of pizza.” Change “1” to “one”.
Bonnie: “I would like to order a hamburger and 1 slice of pizza.” Change “1” to “one”.
Cayenne: “I would like to order a hamburger and 1 slice of pizza.” Change “1” to “one”.
Katrine: “I would like to order a hamburger and 1 slice of pizza.” Change “1” to “one”.
Amber: “I would like to order a hamburger and 1 slice of pizza.” Change “1” to “one”.
MC: “Bonnie is still here, maybe I should go and speak to her” needs a period.
MC: “Hey its Katrine, she is running quite fast.” change “its’ to “It’s”.
MC: “Hey, its Marie.” change “its’ to “It’s”.
“You walk up to her” needs a period.
Katrine: “Oh hey, im doing well.” change “im” to “I’m”.
MC: “ Yeah, i have been training quite a bit so im ready.” fix “Yeah, I have been training quite a bit so I’m ready.”
Katrine: “well lets see if you can carry me first.” fix “Well let’s see if you can carry me first.”
MC: “I do, dont worry.” change “dont” to “don’t”.
Katrine: “Aaaaahhh” needs period.
Katrine: “I got to train more so i can lift it fully myself.” capitalize “I”.
MC: “Ofcourse.” space “Of” and “course”.
MC: “Can i have an extra large soda please?” capitalize “I”.
MC: “I also could use a shower, cya later.” “cya” to “see ya”.
“You got a nice cold shower and decided to go to the sauna.” change “got” to “took”.
Katrine: “Hey, could i join in?” capitalize “I”.
MC: “I have been in the sauna long enough, im gonna go home.” change “im” to “I’m”.
Katrine: “Cya next time!” change “Cya” to “See ya”
MC: “Im sorry to hear that, im sure its just a bad week.” fix “I’m sorry to hear that, I’m sure it’s just a bad week.”
Bonnie: “More like month” needs a period.
“You create her food” (this is for Bonnie stage 1) needs a period.
MC: “Hey its Cayenne.” change “its” to “it’s”.
Cayenne: “Well you know, busy with work and still poor” Needs a period.
MC: “Don’t worry about money here Cayenne, i can pull some strings to make sure you have food on your plate here. Capitalize the “I”.
MC: “No need haha, what would you like?” “laughs No need, what would you like?”
Bonnie: “Oh, its kind of you to ask.” change “its” to “it’s”.
Bonnie: “The real problem is when im tasting them I know what recipe I’ve used. I need to find a way of testing them without being able to tell which ones they are.” Change “im” to “I’m”.
Lisa: “I think all 3 of us have been snacking on the fast food a bit too much lately.” Change “3” to “three”.
Katrine: “No, im taking a little bit easier this week.” should be fixed to “No, I’m taking it a little bit easier this week.”
Katrine: “Its always good to listen to your body if you get a muscle tweak.” change “Its” to “It’s”.
Katrine: “I really like it in here, if only i had some tasty food it would be perfect.” Capitalize “I”.
Katrine: “I didnt actually mean that, but im quite hungry so why not.” Change “didnt” to “didn’t” and “im” to “I’m”.
MC: “what would you like to order?” (this is to Katrine stage 1) capitalize “What”.
Marie: “It helps that the girls already seem to have quite an appetite haha.” change “haha” to a laughing action laughs, giggles etc.
Katrine: “Woah, you are stronger than i thought.” capitalize “I”.
MC: “Or maybe, you arent as heavy as you think you are.” add apostrophe to “aren’t”.
“Katrine: “Well if thats the case, i guess you wont mind me pigging out on some burgers?” Fix to “Well if that’s the case, I guess you won’t mind me pigging out on some burgers?”
MC: “Hey Marie, Katrine and i would like to eat a couple burgers.” capitalize “I”.
Katrine: “I would like 3 cheeseburgers please.” change “3” to “three”.
MC: “And i would like 1 doubleburger.” fix “And I would like one double cheeseburger.”
Katrine: “You work here right? Could you ask them for a milkshake aswell, i forgot.” fix to “You work here right? Could you ask them for a milkshake as well, I forgot.”
MC: “Hey Marie, could i get a milkshake for Katrine aswell?” capitalize “I” and a space between “as” and “well”.
Katrine: “I really needed that, i have been holding out on eating burgers for too long.” capitalize “I” and I would change “that” to “this”. When this line is said the image is of Katrine eating so it wouldn’t make sense for her to talk in past tense.
Katrine: “As long as you can carry me i wont starve myself.” capitalize “I” and add an apostrophe to “won’t”.
MC: “No problem, cya later Katrine!” change “cya” to “see ya”
Katrine: “Cya!” change “Cya” to “See ya”
MC: “Of course, can’t let you or my favorite sweet shop go out of business” Needs a period.
Bonnie: “That’s better, but im not sure why. Can I have another.” fix to “That’s better, but I’m not sure why. Can I have another?”
Katrine: “Thats a great idea, it works for the gym.” change “Thats” to “That’s”.
Katrine: “Wow, I cant believe I ate all those.” apostrophe for “cant”
Katrine: “Would you want to come back to mine for a bit?” change “mine” to “my place”
MC: “Nice place you have here” needs a period.
Katrine: “But i’ve been fantasizing about this all day.” Change “i’ve” to “I’ve”.
MC: “Its definitely not too forward.” change “Its” to “It’s”.
Katrine: “Take a look at the big babies, i was always blessed with big boobs.” fix “Take a look at these big babies, I was always blessed with big boobs.”
Katrine: “You really like my belly, dont you?” change “dont” to “don’t”.
“Katrine starts moaning, after a bit she takes her panty and rips a hole in to it allowing you to finger her better.” Change “panty” to “pantyhose”(as it is what she is wearing in the scene) and “in to” to “into”.
Katrine: “Look what you did to my panty, now my pussy is fully visible.” This line doesn’t quite make sense since it’s stated she rips her pantyhose. Change to “Look what you made me do to my pantyhose, now my pussy is fully visible.” Either way change “panty” to “pantyhose”.
Katrine: “Thats it, that feels amazing” Change “Thats” to “That’s”.
Katrine: “Dont stop.” Change “Dont” to “Don’t”.
Katrine: “OMG that was great, might have been the best sex i have ever had.” change to “Oh my god that was great, might have been the best sex I have ever had.”
Katrine: “I’m gonna clean up the mess we made, i have to go for a run in a minute.” capitalize “I”.
MC: “I guess i’m going home then, Bye Katrine.” change “i’m” to “I’m” and “Bye” to “bye”.
Katrine: “Bye Bye.” change second “Bye” to “bye”
Daisy: “Today i want to adress some terms used to indentify how big a person is.” fix this to “Today I want to address some of the terms used to identify how big a person is.”
Daisy: “BBW is an abbreviation for Big Beautifull Woman, Ladies in this category generally weigh between 200 (91 kg) and 350 pounds (159 kg). Some errors fix “BBW is an abbreviation for Big Beautiful Woman, ladies in this category generally weigh between 200 lbs (91 kg) and 350 lbs (159kg).
Daisy: “SSBBW is an abbreviation for Super Sized Big Beautiful Woman. Ladies in this category generally weigh between 350 (159 kg) and 600 pounds (272 kg).” “SSBBW is an abbreviation for Super Sized Big Beautiful Woman. Ladies in this category generally weigh between 350 lbs (159 kg) and 600 lbs (272 kg).”
Daisy: “Humans most often arent really able to gain more than the max weight of an SSBBW.” Change “arent” to “aren’t”.
Daisy: “An SSBBW close to the max weight is a gigantic woman, and is immediately noticed in public.” change “An” to “A”.
Daisy: “USSBBW is an abbreviation for Ultra Super Sized Big Beautiful Woman. Ladies in this category generally weigh more than 600 pounds (272 kg). Change “pounds” to “lbs”.
Daisy: “A milkshake is a sweet beverage mad by blending milk, ice cream and a flavor, for example strawberry.” change “mad” to “made”.
Bonnie’s text inviting the MC over for more experimenting after finding her partner’s book has some typos in it. Bonnie: “Hi, you wont believe what i found down the back of the counter. Its my partners old cookbook and its full of recipes! I think this could be a real game changer, are you free to do some more experimenting?” Fix missing apostrophes lower case etc, example: “Hi, you won’t believe what I found down the back of the counter. It’s my partner’s old cookbook and it’s full of recipes! I think this could be a real game changer, are you free to do some more experimenting?”
Bonnie: “No, its closer than anything I made before, but still something is off.” change “its” to “it’s”.
MC: “The note on the plate says blend six high sugar” needs a period.
Bonnie: “Interesting. Im starting to feel full again though.” change “Im” to “I’m”.
Librarian: “Hi, im sorry we are closing shortly.” change “im” to “I’m”.
MC: “That’s ok, I wont be long.” change “wont” to “won’t”.
“Leanne quickly devours the pizza , showing just how hungry she was” needs a period.
Lisa: “Yeah i am also leaving, cya later.” capitalize “I”.
Cayenne: “It’s a long story, some weird people pay me to wear this and eat as much as i can.” capitalize “I”.
Cayenne: “Indeed, but they pay alot of money, so i won’t say no.” capitalize “I”. “alot” change to “a lot”.
MC: “That is great, you always had struggles with money so i’m happy those are gone now.” change “i’m” to “I”m”.
Bonnie: “Woah, this is way more than i ordered, i think the orders got mixed up.” Capitalize “I”s.
MC: “Oh, i am sorry, are you alright with taking this order without additional cost?” Sentence is a bit stiff has some errors. Would suggest something like, Example: “Oh, that’s my bad. Don’t worry about paying for the extra food it’s on the house.” capitalize the “I”.
Bonnie: “Well, i won’t say not to free food.” Capitalize “I”.
MC: “In that case, i hope you enjoy the food.” Example: “In that case, please enjoy and let me know if you need anything else.” capitalize the “I”
Katrine: “Woah, this is way more than i ordered, i think the orders got mixed up.” Capitalize “I”s.
Katrine: “Well, i won’t say not to free food.” Capitalize “I”.
Luna: “Woah, this is way more than i ordered, i think the orders got mixed up.” Capitalize “I”s.
Luna: “Well, i won’t say not to free food.” Capitalize “I”.
Maya: “Woah, this is way more than i ordered, i think the orders got mixed up.” Capitalize “I”s.
Maya: “Well, i won’t say not to free food.” Capitalize “I”.
Marie: “Ohhh fuck URRRP yeah, you’re making this piggy burp. Making lots of room in piggy’s tummy. Maybe after we’re done, this piggy’s gonna have another snack, get bigger and fatter and OHHHHHH FUCK.” The “FUCK” is halfway cut off on the bottom of the screen for this great dialogue.
“I want to learn about onionrings” as an option to pick in class with Daisy “onionrings” needs a space to be “onion” and “rings”. “I want to learn about onion rings.” (stage five).
Amber: “I think i have had enough alcohol, i should get going, thanks for the fun night!” Capitalize the “I”s.
Bonnie: “I don’t know, ive eaten so many already.” Change “ive” to “I’ve”.
Bonnie: “Ooooh” Needs a period.
“Bonnie groans as she stirs from her chocolate foodcoma.” Space is needed between “food” and “coma”
Bonnie: “Im sorry, I didn’t mean to give you extra work.” Change “Im” to “I’m”.
MC: “No its no problem.” change “its” to “it’s”.
Bonnie: “Im sorry, I guess I was missing my older partner.” Change “Im” to “I’m”.
MC: “Im glad they are enjoying them.” Change “Im” to “I’m”.
Bonnie: “I guess I wont be needing this.” Change “wont” to “won’t”
Bonnie: “Ugh, think im starting to get full now.” change “im” to “I’m”.
Bonnie: “Ok that’s it, im full.” change “im” to “I’m”.
Luna: “Now lets go to the scientist i was talking about.” change “lets” to “let’s” and capitalize the “I”.
“Playername These are the nurses that have also agreed to be test subjects on the drug trail: Nurses Roxie, then Natlie who you already know, Charlene, and Sally. Change “These” to “these” and “trail” to “trial”, add a comma after the playername.
“Cherlene 37.3inchbust 32D 26.2inchwaist 38.6inchhip 78Kg” “Sally 35.6inchbust 32D 25.7ichwaist 39.3inchhip 80Kg ‘’ “Britta 34.3inchbust 32B 25.2inchwaist 40.2inch hip 78Kg” These need spaces between a lot of the words and periods at the end of sentences. (this is when luna hands you the other girls measurements in stage five event.)
“They calorie rich cream sure to leave a lasting impact on her waistline.” Change “They” to “The” and insert an “is” between “cream” and “sure”.
Bonnie: “Oooh, I don’t think ive ever been this full.” Change “ive” to “I’ve”.
Bonnie: “Im so sleepy….think ill just take a nap.” Change “Im” to “I’m” and “i’ll” to “I’ll”.
“Inspecting the torn page it seems to be one of the missing ones from Bonnies partners notebook.” add apostrophes. “Inspecting the torn page it seems to be one of the missing ones from Bonnie’s partner’s notebook.”
“You wonder if Bonnies customers would mind?” change “Bonnies” to “Bonnie’s”.
“After helping bonnie clean up you head home.” capitalize Bonnie.
“Despite her eagerness its clear something is bothering her.” change to “Despite her eagerness, it’s clear something is bothering her.”
“When Daisy finally arrives, its hard for me not to gawk at the way her swimsuit shows off her body.” Change “its” to “it’s”.
MC: “Im sure it went well and people appreciated your chocolates.” change “Im” to “I’m”.
“Bonnie blushes” needs a period.
Bonnie: “Im supposed to be catering for an exclusive event next week.” change “Im” to “I’m”.
Bonnie “But they have some specific requests that im not super confident on. change “im” to “I’m”.
Bonnie: “Yes, its an alcoholic chocolate that is typically made with a spirit like whiskey.” Change “its” to “it’s”.
“You probably only really needed to make one, but its so hard to get the right ratio’s with such small quantities.” Change “its” to “it’s” and “raito’s” with “ratios”.
“Besides, you have a feeling Bonnie wont mind a few extra’s to keep herself busy between batches.”
Bonnie: “Its good, but maybe a little soft this time. Don’t want them melting before anyone can eat them.” change “Its” to “It’s”.
Bonnie: “Ugh, im so full.” change “im” to “I’m”.
“moments later its gone and her mouth is open once again, waiting for the next one.” Capitalize “moments” and change “its” to “it’s”.
“It is clear that bonnie enjoys the interaction as she slowly starts pushing her hips into you a little bit more with each additional thrust.” “bonnie” needs to be Capitalized.
Bonnie: “Don’t worry, im on the pill, come help me finish too.” change “im” to “I’m”.
“After a moment though Roxie decides that is enough and then gets dressed and goes ahead to call the next testsubject.” Space between “test” and “subject”.
Sally: “I now weigh 88Kg, which means i gained 8 kilograms!” change “i” to “I”.
During Bonnie’s stage seven home event the option “Lets have sex together” change “Lets” to “Let’s”.
“It is clear what bonnie wants.” Capitalize Bonnie.
“Thrusting your cock into her drenched womanhood makes Bonny her body jiggle even harder.” Remove “Bonny” as it is not needed. But if it’s staying around correct it to “Bonnie”
MC: “Want a drink?.” (to Lisa) Remove the period after the question mark.
Bonnie: “Playername, Im so happy to see you.” change “Im” to “I’m”.
MC: “Not right now, im here for Bonnie.” change “im” to “I’m”.
Katrine: “Playername, Fancy running into you here.” change “Fancy” to “fancy” (Bonnie’s stage eight event)
Katrine: “Im good, just enjoying a post workout treat.” change “Im” to “I’m” (Bonnie’s stage eight event)
Katrine: “Buts its nothing I can’t work off.” Drop the “s” from “Buts” change “its” to “it’s”. (Bonnie’s stage eight event)
“Its both exciting and a little scary, you don’t want to ruin Bonnies shops reputation.” change “Its” to “It’s” and “Bonnies” to “Bonnie’s”.
“You recognise the last address on the list too, its your school.” change “its” to “it’s”.
Daisy: “Good, and im guessing rather fattening? Change “im” to “I’m”.
Daisy: “Its ok.” change “Its” to “It’s”.
MC: “For its worth, people seemed to really love the new chocolates.” Should be “For what it’s worth” but change “its” to “it’s” if the sentence is staying the same.
“Despite having eaten her fill, its clear Bonnie still likes the looks of both of them.” change “its” to “it’s”.
Not to be out done, John has presented a classic but perfect looking 12 layer fondant chocolate cake coated in buttercream, caramel drizzle and flakes of honeycomb. Change “12” to “twelve”.
Bonnie: “Its something else.” change “Its” to “It’s”.
“From the look on Rebecca face it seems like this is the first time she had spoken back at her like that.” Change “Rebecca” to “Rebecca’s” and “she” should be “Bonnie” in this case.
Rebecca: “We taste them, its not rocket science.” change “its’’ to “it’s”.
“Its clearly good, but you knew it would be. After all Rebecca is the one who unknowingly helped you with your recipes.” Change “Its” to “It’s”.
Bonnie: “Its ok, you know you don’t have to hide it from me.” change “Its” to “It’s”.
“The giant cake gone the only evidence of it a few crumbs and Bonnies giant stomach.” Change “Bonnies” to “Bonnie’s”.
Bonnie: “Oooh, I don’t think ive ever been this full before.” Change “ive” to “I’ve”.
Bonnie: “OHH its so tight, please take it slow.” change “its” to “it’s.
MC: “Hey, its Rebecca.” change “its” to “it’s”.
“With enough made for the shop for the week, but Bonnies tray running empty you make an additional batch of the new chocolates.” change “Bonnies” to “Bonnie’s” and add a comma after “empty”.
Bonnie: “I can’t eat anymore, i am completely full.” capitalize the “I”, but should just change “i am” to “I’m”.
Luna: “Good thing i wasn’t done stripping yet.” change “i” to “I”.
“Hey Playername, Im glad you came.” change “Im” to “I’m”.
“You slowly start thrusting into her food filled body, creating a symphony of moans from Bonnie, Creaks from the bed, and wet slapping from the sex.” change “Creaks” to “creaks”, “food filled” to “food-filled” and drop the “the” after “from” and before “sex”.
Rebecca: “Its not about selling them.” change “Its” to “It’s”.
Rebecca: “Its like I can’t think without them.” “Its” to “It’s”.
Rebecca: “Im sorry, I just haven’t been thinking clearly since…since I tasted them.” change “Im” to “I’m”.
MC: “Well, I guess im done.” change “im” to “I’m”.
MC: “Im not sure what you mean, just an honest mistake with the orders.” change “Im” to “I’m”.
“Finally as the clock shows 2 minuets too the last box joins the empty pile.” change “2” to “two”, “minuets” to “minutes” and “too” to “till”.
MC: “Im surprised you managed to eat everything.” change “Im” to “I’m”.
Bonnie: “Thank you Rebecca for accepting this, im sure it will work out better for the both of us in the long run.” change “im” to “I’m”.
Bonnie: “Ughh, Yeah…its really good.” change “its” to “it’s”.
“No longer held in by her clothes, it looked even bigger.” Not sure what “it” is supposed to be in this sentence. I was assuming body since it was mentioned in the previous sentence but obviously with Bonnie having the largest engorged gut up to this point for her from a huge stuffing it would be either of these in my mind. So, putting body, gut, stomach, belly, whatever is supposed to be “it” in this sentence would help with context otherwise (to me at least) it feels like part of the sentence was left out. (Bonnie stage eleven event when returning home for BB).
Bonnie: “Oh hello, I hope you slept well.”
“After having breakfast together with Bonnie you take you leave.” The second “you” needs to be “your”.
Bonnie: “These are amazing. I could eat an entires shop worth of just these.” Change “entires” to “entire” and “shop” to “shops”.
MC: “Well, since we are now partners, they are not going anywhere.” change “we are” to “we’re”
Bonnie: “Well, thats another great thing about us making it official.” change “thats” to “that’s’'.
MC: ““What is the matter is my piggy getting to fat to be on top?” change “to” to “too”.
Typos, spelling errors, etc for Fattening Career 0.05b.pdf (71.6 KB)
Thanks for the awesome update I look forward to the next.
Had this error when attempting to decompress using 7-Zip. Anyone have any ideas?
@Krodmandoon Thanks for the incredibly detailed bug report.
I’m glad you enjoyed this update.
I will do my best to fix as many bugs and typos as i can for 0.05c
After i get the final bugfix patch out i will take my time to go through the suggestions for the future of the game and will probably make a post to react to couple of them.
@fianna420 It seems like your download got corrupted, could you try downloading the game another time?