New illustration + little animation for the Galactic Love Elite Pilot tier members! featuring Kyoko, Mina, Rin, Dr. Johnson!
To those who will see it, thank you so much for the support! I’m experimenting with different things and I hope I’ll be able to give some extras to the most dedicated supporters. I know the animation isn’t that great, but there is also the high-quality static image.
Let me know what you think and show some love for our side characters
Azumi and Maki’s route are quite fun and Eri is growing on me though I am looking forward to more dere then tsun in Act 6. I do enjoy how every girls belly dips over their bikini waistband,
Azumi’s leopard print bikini looks good. I wonder if she will show us some others if we end up on trip if the team wins at the end. Also her pressing her belly against MC and then her gluttonous choice to go back for more burgers after alright eating is so good. I feel like she really does like to fill herself full.
Maki is still my favorite character even if she is the smallest. I like the implication that she was thinking the same thing as the MC while mediating is great. She also seems to be wearing the stringiest bikini. I’m just surprised she didn’t go for more food based on her personality.
Er’s route focusing on her trying to act more mother like is nice.
Thanks for the update! I’m excited to see how big Haruka and Shiori are in Act 6. Here are my thoughts on the latest update.
Summary
Eri - Out of the all the pool scenes between the other girls, I thought hers all around is the best in regards to relationship development. How Eri and the MC were thrown into the situation of what it is like to take care of a child was very clever. It perfectly fit where the two are in their relationship arc. Eri realizing that she is not good with kids, the MC helping her out, it was a perfect parent bonding experience. At the same time, Eri keeping her charm in being a tsundere towards the MC in what really is a wholesome update perfectly fit. In regards to her sprite and seeing her from the back side for the first time in the VN, honestly my first thought was realizing how beautiful her hair is, she has that Youko Kurama vibe going on. I wouldn’t complain to seeing a pin up of her with fox ears
Maki - This is a tough one for me to write out since Maki has been my favorite. Until now, this is the first update for any of the girls where for the most part, I just did not like. The way it ended, in my opinion, this would have been a red flag to Maki on how the MC acted, and it would make sense to me if she tried distancing herself from him here on out. For what I liked first, the workout and meditation scenes. The MC thinking of Maki’s belly fondling and Maki thinking the same thing during meditation was great. The meditation sprite, she looked very cute and as well her behind one. She does have a cute little bubble butt. The MC and Maki’s conversation I did not like after she finished eating her hot dog. I thought it was fine to lightly bring up Haruka about how her and him really liked the pool parks hot dogs when they were kids, but after that he should have steered the conversation away from bringing her up again at this point. There is clueless, but talking about other women in a setting like this, I would find it hard for Maki to brush it off. The MC calling Haruka fat behind her back to Maki and then himself shutting down when Maki asked him if he thought she has gained a lot of weight was pathetic of him. Maki was right to walk off after that conversation. In the next update between those two, I would say the MC has to give Maki some type of apology for the way he acted at the pool.
Azumi - I thought Azumi’s pool scene was good. My interpretation of Azumi’s story so far is that she wants to be treated like a queen and not a trophy wife. Drinking is her coping mechanism after the divorce and then eating when meeting the MC. She hides her pain of wanting to be loved by a man under her brash Yottadere personality. Her fortune from the crepe a while back mentioned stuff about family and then the child interactions at the pool make me think she wants a child as well. I was on Azumi’s side to get rid of the kid right away when he showed up. I know at this point in the VN, there now has been an update where the MC and one of the girls have had interactions with kids. I personally would like to see less of that from now on in the story except with Eri obviously. I’m just not really a fan of kids.
I think you got the point very well with Azumi and Eri. Maki’s question should be read as “I’ve gained a lot of weight, haven’t I?! Please say yes!!” in the sense that se got jealous when MC said that Haruka is fat because Maki is a secret feedee and would like to be like that too. That’s what I meant with that dialogue, but I’ll definitely fix a couple of lines.
And don’t worry, no more interactions with kids except for Maki who as already mentioned has a grandson
Act 6 will definitely have a lot more romantic development for all the girls and Eri’s backstory and Maki’s situation at the dojo will be explained.
Caught up with the latest update - very much feels like the scenes unique to each girl are starting to tip to the point where I imagine it’s all route exclusive content. I enjoyed both the work storyline developments and the water park scenes, both with the writing but also with how far the production values have come since this game originally was posted (god it’s getting close to a year isn’t it?) so it’s really good. I was particularly impressed with the CG so looking forward to seeing what else you’ve got in the works!
RE feedback, I’m really liking where it’s going so I would just say take as long as you need and focus on what you want to put out there. I’d quite happily take a focused approach on one girl at a time as the story fragments a bit now we’re getting towards the end or whatever makes workload manageable. Very much looking forward to act 6 and beyond!
Thanks for the clarification. Since Act 6 is coming up, I wanted to follow up on a question I asked a while back after you showed a teaser of a fuller faced Haruka. You said you were not sure yet at the time, but will the girls at stage 6 get a double-chin, fuller checks, and/or a thicker neck by chance?
Yes that’s the plan. From now on there will be more scenes focused on a single girl.
I’m still deciding about that I will have to experiment a bit!
Anyway, I haven’t been able to work on the game these last four days but I’m back now. I’ll finish the gallery then I’ll start writing the script for Act 6. I already have a very clear idea on how to end the common part of the story, I hope it doesn’t take me too long!
Alright, the stages gallery screen is finished. It’s just a simple screen accessed from the existing codex that allows to view the stages one at a time and see some informations like height, weight, bmi, obesity class etc. Now I need to choose the actual numbers for each stage and fix some sprites inconsistencies. It will be possible to view the progression from the front, side and back. In the future I can also add a screen with all the stages side by side.
So, the next update will include the gallery, some sprites improvements and small fixes to the pool dialogues. After that I will actually start working on Act 6!
(I don’t know how usable your old saves will be with the upcoming version since I’ve changed a lot of the old code. Unfortunately I’m just one person and don’t really have the time/knowledge to plan and manage these things properly. I apologize in advance )