Finally had some time to play the newest update, so here’s my review:
Positives:
Despite it being a very lore/world building heavy chapter, I still actually enjoyed it. The point of an rpg is to build up a story, characters, and worlds. No need to go balls to the wall immediately with the fetish elements. Let it come naturally. I think you made a well calculated and mature decision to release a new chapter of a fetish game without much (but still some) of the fetish. I believe in the long run the game will be better for it. Some Bulls*** works because on top of being a great fetish game, Nerds built compelling stories and characters without these aspects. They’re given personalities beyond liking to eat a lot, which I think Evoria (while great in many ways) falls victim too. There’s humor and interesting lore as well. So don’t apologize for not cramming your game with fetish elements at every opportunity.
I like the mind palace being kind of a hub world/city replacement that gets built as the story progresses. I found the fighting trials very difficult in a good way and an awesome mechanic (The difficulty might have been from my own stupidity and I couldn’t figure out how to go back to test that). I can’t wait to see what you add in the magic upgrade tree. I think that’s a great addition for future content like collectibles and side quests. The puzzles were top tier once again. I tried for over an hour a half to get the final mind crystal fragment and couldn’t figure it out. I’m a huge fan of object vore, so that was awesome to see and I love that they have to swallow down the mana crystals to get stronger. I hope there’s more object vore in the future as well as stuffing and regular vore. Not much to say other than that. I’m finding the story interesting so far and want to keep playing.
Negatives?
I wouldn’t really say these are negatives, but more like very minor and subjective differences in opinion. I’m kinda just echoing previous sentiments though.
El Lena still seems to similar to Renee. Woman living on the streets who gets brought into a thieves den and then switches sides is just too samey to me. IDK how I would even change it at this point, but hopefully you’re able to keep her personality different enough from her and more backstory that changes my mind. Still this is pretty minor since I’m enjoying her part it the story so far regardless.
Julina’s eyes
Not a huge fan of weight gain, so I hope like fat blobs or bbws don’t become a thing. (Just my taste. It’s your game. You do you)
Looking forward to the next chapter
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Awesome work! I’m looking forward to the heavier focus on vore in chapter 4!
My only gripe with this game are the puzzles. They often times just feel tedious and annoying more than they do challenging. This could just be a me thing though.
Also, please try to avoid having instant game overs for failing a puzzle. I messed up on the color puzzle and had to redo the boss fight prior to it.
Apart from these minor gripes, I am really loving the characters and the story! I am excited to see where this goes!!
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Thank you for the review! I take all opinions and criticism into the making of the game and yours are no different!
First of all, I am very happy that others like me not going full vore-fetish in this game. Of course there will be vore, including more object vore, but like I said at the start of the project:
”I plan to tell a story with vore, not have vore disguised as a story.”
Secondly, I agree on El’Lena being too similar to Renee but when it comes to redemption of an ex-bandit, how much different can the story beats really be? lol
I am however planning to add more differences to her in Chapter 4 to hopefully make her more distinct. Also, for the weight gain part of the game, I am a fan of and will probably add but not have it be a “main” part of it. Think like Some Bulls*** take on weight where fat becomes magic and is burned off almost instantly.
Either way, thank you for the review and I hope you enjoy Chapter 4 as well!
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Heya! Sorry you felt that way about the puzzles, I hope you understand I’m not trying to make them tedious and annoying on purpose lol.
However the insant game over, that is not part of the game. If you fail the colour puzzle, you lose like 1/5 of your full health. So if you had less than that before entering and not saving in between, I’m sorry but I can’t really change that.
Though I am glad you enjoy the characters and I hope you’ll enjoy them in Chapter 4 as well!
Played the game till the end of the current patch, has quite a bit of promise. Lots of potential for shenanigans, events, and other good stuff. Keep up the good work! Eager to see how thicc or big the girls get slips the protagonist 15 vouches for an all you can eat buffet that is at the capital or largest town/city in the game leaves to distribute more vouchers.
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Thank you so much! Means a lot!
Currently handling some studies so the next chapter may be in a bit sadly, but it’s still being worked on don’t you worry!
Also, I’ll make sure the gals gets those buffet vouchers and that they’ll find plenty more along their adventure like breadcrumbs leading the way hehe
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Just bumping this thread because it looks like DoodleDon made some update posts on Itch about the game.
He released a chapter 4 demo and included extra art in chapter 2 and 3. The full chapter 4 release should be by the end of the summer.
He also wanted to know if anyone would be interested in a Patreon. I personally would be fine throwing a few bucks a month at the game as long as development was consistent. I know you had some university struggles, so if consistent development on this would lead to academic pain, then I wouldn’t put that stress on yourself.
Apologies if posting this here was out of place. I just randomly looked at the itch page for the first time in a few weeks and saw you had posted an update and figured anyone following this thread might want to know.
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Oh quite the opposite, thank you so much for bumping my thread up here! I completely forgot to mention about the demo and my university struggles here!
That is entierly on me and thank you for reminding me to post here too lol
As for patreon, thank you for considering but I will hold out on patreon stuff until I have a much better and consistent work flow so you all don’t waste your money on me 
Thank you again for telling everyone what I should’ve done long ago and I hope you enjoyed the demo!
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