Myre’s Massive Mealtime v0.618
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Brain soup back pain anyway here we are!
This month i switched focus and edited/revised another section of content! I might have touched the first section of it before? But i touched it again!
It’s the section of talking between the appetizer and the full dinner where you can talk about Myre’s belly. I went through and rephrased a lot of things, updated the poses, and wrote more words. I expanded a bit in a few places, and added a few places which change a bit depending on Myre’s belly size. Also added a couple places where previous choices get references and tagged a few places where it would be good to add more reactivity.
Overall this amounts to a 500 word increase in the word count, but that doesn’t account for word that I cut to improve the flow. That section should be pretty clean now? Maybe? Hopefully?
Happy March!
Changes:
- Revised the content of the ‘talk about Myre’s belly’ to add the newest poses and expression. I edited/revise the wording of some things. Wrote some short variations for belly size in a few places.
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