I think you’re understanding perfectly. Genevieve didn’t come across as hostile to the MC at all, her sassiness was cute, and her bad attitude was directed at Annora. It was clear to me that her disapproval of Annora’s behavior and weight gain came from someplace inside herself - jealousy that Annora was getting the attention of the MC in spite of letting herself go, and the repressed desire to do so herself. Seeing her self-control break down and her vulnerability emerge over her arc thus far has been super hot, and her presence never spoiled a scene.
I can’t say I’d mind if Annora didn’t appear in the pool scene with Brenna so we could focus on the girl stuffing herself for us in a bikini, or at least not show up just to look upset with us
If it’s not too forward to share vision I’m having: in the scene with Brenna, Annora and the pie, Brenna is mad that Annora helps herself, and observes how we look at Annora after she eats a couple slices. Instead of scorning us for letting Annora do it, Brenna starts to rapidly consume pie too, because she badly wants to eat the food she made as well as compete for our attention. By the time it’s over they are both stuffed. Something along those lines could feel more enjoyable for us, while still maintaining the class-based and romantic rivalry between the girls?
If sharing visions is not allowed please tell me and I won’t do it again, not that I intend to lol. Thank you for indulging me.
Welcome @alexgray15 to the site. @vrazz does not have a patreon or other places the game or updates are featured. Everything is hosted here and for free.
The only form of support currently able to be provided is feedback and dialogue here.
Vrazz might want to consider making a kofi imo for people that want to tip them for there hard work on the project. Since a patreon was not something they were interested in starting in the past to my knowledge.
I enjoyed this new take on the game. I look forward to future updates.
Something I wouldn’t mind seeing would be a scene where Annora and Brenna are competing for the MC’s affection. The scene would have them sitting at a table together, trying to out eat the other in an attempt to win the MC’s affection.
While that’s going on, Genevieve could be off to the side watching in disgust, while snacking on some pastries. Despite her disgust, she’s so engrossed by what’s going on that she’s completely unaware of just how many pastries she has eaten (a dozen or more).
By the end, regardless on who wins, Annora and Brenna are both too stuffed to move and fall into food coma’s. Gennvieve then realizes how much she ate and slowly walks away with a painfully full belly.
It’s the second time I had to log-in and leave some feedback. That really means something, because this update was AMAZING.
I played all of the other versions right after they were released. They were all great until some point, because, for me, Annora just got too big for my likening. It all resulted in me not really wanting to try out the new version, but I am so glad I did. Brenna is by far my favourite character. Her desing is just… On another level. I think she looks far more realistic than any other girl in the game and her body type just… Really suits her.
As for my feedback:
For anyone that isn’t sure whether the game is worth a try or not - TRY IT!
And for You, creator, PLEASE keep it up with her character just the way you did the entire time, especially with all of the pool scenes and teasing. It was AMAZING.
Good luck with your future work, I’ll definetely be looking forward for a future update!
I’m honestly annoyed with myself that it took so long to actually get around to playing this game, but I love the concept and the personalities of the characters and the time skips feel well spaced enough that the story doesn’t feel rushed. I’m very excited to see what’s in store for the story
I just got around to playing the new update, and I really really enjoyed it. The scenes are a lot of fun, and I really enjoy Brenna as a character. As others have said, I do think it would help if there was a way to get less anger from Annora or Brenna depending on your choices. The amount of anger felt disproportionate to the actual scene and actions. And I think it would make a lot more sense if you had to make multiple actions that led there.
I haven’t posted one in a while, so it’s time for a poll!
Who’s your favorite character in QoC so far?
Annora
Brenna
Genevieve
Maerwynn
0voters
I’d like to hear why the character is your favorite. It helps me understand what our community likes so that I can expand the existing characters (lit.) and create new ones. I’m also open to hearing what you don’t like about certain characters.
I’m slowly plugging away at the next update. I think the new content in Brenna’s/Annora’s third weight stage is going to be a big hit.
I definitely do like Annora the most, probably because she’s the main character that gets the most attention. But I do enjoy character arc of wanting to avoid gaining because her gluttonous tendencies before fully embracing being a gaining later on in the story
I voted Annora, but I think that’s just because we’ve had the most time with her and she has the most content. I also like Brenna and am looking forward to the stage 3 stuff with her.
Genevieve right now I’m not a huge fan of, but if she ends up embracing the gain I’ll probably pull a 180 and she’ll go right to my favorite.
Maerwynn seems good but we’ve seen so little of her that I don’t have a good grasp on her personality yet. I like her design, though.
Yeah, I was expecting Annora to be #1 if for no other reason than because she has the most content right now. But I wanted to see how many players prefer Brenna since I received a lot of positive feedback about her after she was introduced to the story.
I’m happy to see Genevieve and Maerwynn getting a comparable amount of votes, especially considering Maer has only been in 1 scene so far.
Honestly all the characters have a place for me, but so far I strangely have such a love for Brenna. I just find her character more interesting than the princesses, and her figure/face are very attractive imo
