TheDemonWithin(TDW) - Feature Complete, Choices Matter, Twine Game

still curious as to who this mysterious fourth girl is.

Its your demon - if you have 35 bond with her and try to spend time with her at level 4 or level 5 it will trigger a scene where she says she wants to get closer to you in a more intimate way

idk if thats the best way to do a spoiler tag but I think it worked lol

oh-ho. and here i thought it was the runner for some reason. good job.

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Haha ty, yeah those girls in the wander part of the town like the runner are just a bit of extra flavor

I see there are no endings related to low/incomplete weight gain

There were originally endings for if you got a girl to plush but I ended up removing them because I felt it devalued the time put in to get a girl to fat stage and complete her ending scenes

I’ve really been enjoying the game and wanted to share a suggestion. I think it could add more flavor if you included images of the girls when meeting them at the start of a date. The written descriptions are already pretty good, but having an image to accompany them—rather than only seeing the aftermath at the end—would create a nice before and after effect.

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Simple bug report:

No matter what you input as a name in the provided input box, the demon calls you “Vincent” here. I think you may have missed a variable.

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Good catch! Yeah you’re right I must have mistakenly put the default name instead of $playerName like it should be. I’ll fix that now

Thats a pretty good suggestion, I’ll keep that in mind :slight_smile:

Great game! Mia is my favorite character so far and would love to see added future content for her. I did come across some bugs with her route though. When Mia has you come over to see her sister, during the conversation, I get these error messages.

Also, not sure if Mia’s route is not finished yet or if this is a bug too, but after the visit with the sister, you are given the option to hang out, and when you call her, you are presented with no options.There is also no pictures when you pick Mia as the girl you want to be with at the end.

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Damn so her shit was just borked lol. Thanks for taking the time to bug report and glad you’re enjoying the game! Uploading a fix for all those bugs now - You should be able to access Mia’s end scenes, her images at the end, and that if/else if in the angela scene should be gone.

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Another bug, this time with Uru:

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Appreciate you, uploading fix now

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>450+ images

>1.9 MB

This game fetches its images from a server, doesn’t it? Could you release a version that comes with the images? I’m kinda paranoid about this kind of dependency.

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For this title, most likely not, but probably for future titles.

this is strictly a “stick a pin in it for later” but consider a “New Game+” option for future titles, for folks who want to have it all, ignore time constraints, throw on a couple of extra stages onto the girls, that kind of thing. Some of us are greedy that way. :wink:

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Not a bad idea at all!

In the buffet date with Lucy, option “Use your powers”, the page ends without any links.

Stats

Day 13 / 75

Demon Stats

Level: 3 / 5

Power: 221 / 200

Energy: 0

Bond: 45

Money: 640

Girls Met: 3 / 4

Affection: 14 / 100 — None

Corruption: 45 / 100 — Low

Weight: 157 lbs / 150 lbs

Stage: 1 / 4

Also, since we can’t save and demon energy is wasted at the end of the day, and sometimes you want to build affection and not weight/corruption, it’s SUPER fucking annoying that you can’t “back” before the start of a date. Ugh.