@Somchu I have to say, I absolutely adore this game. “Endless” text adventures are my jam for this stuff. Finally made an account just for this very post.
You did so many things I like mechanically, such as events being random during exploration (Seems not to be everyone’s favorite heh) I enjoyed it enough that I actually created some ‘content’ for personal use.
Made it so through the magic of science you avoid the immobile end or decline the magic of science and get the ending as normal. Added some more adaptive dialogue based on weight etc. Added a house call option for Dr. Halessie with some alternate dialogue and replaced the treadmill with another activity during the house call (medicine ball). The house call I only made available if you can’t leave your room at the end of your day and did not visit Dr. Halessie.
In the end, I guess I’m asking for your blessing. If I DM you a copy with my edits after I’ve taken some time to make sure everything is prim and proper, and the ‘quality’ (grammar etc) meets your satisfaction I could share updates with other users on this thread etc. I don’t want to add too much if I am the only one who gets to use it if that makes sense.
Sorry for the wall of text, and of course thank you very much for the game~