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Chapter 4? Isnât this the third release? Iâm mildly confused on what is deemed a âchapterâ?
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I get confused too. Part One had three chapters. Part Two will have three also. So Chapter Four is the first part of Part Two.
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Holy crap, there is a chapter 4? I want to play it nowâŚ
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What a nice gift for the holidays!
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Is there a plan to fix the typos, punctuations, and errors that are present in chapter one-four? I can see that the demo up to chapter four still have typos and such that have been previously reported. I am assuming that most are still there since I stopped keeping track while playing through chapter four after I noticed that (from what I could see) most were still in. I didnât want to waste my time documenting errors if they are planned to be left in.
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Iâm going to fix any typos and spelling mistakes. I have run all the code through Word as a spell checker so it should be pretty good. Punctuation wise, from the beginning Iâve decided not to use periods when thereâs only one sentence displayed on the screen at a time. All other punctuation should be fine.
Outside of saving time not fixing the errors, I donât particularly understand the reason for this but itâs your game. Thank you for the clarification.
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Your spellchecker has helped make sure each word is spelled correctly but OFTEN things will happen like⌠youâll mean âtooâ but the word âtwoâ will appear.
There are dozens of examples of this sort of typo. Some more advanced spellcheckers look for this, but I donât think word does so.
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As usual, the renderings are very very good and the scenes are entertaining albeit somewhat unrealistic. The lack of proofreading does take away some from the released product, but for me the renders make it worthwhile still. Itâs a fun project to play through, that is for sure.
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Now you might think well, âtooâ and âtwoâ sound the same so who cares? But there are slightly worse mistakes too like âquieterâ becoming âquitter.â
In theory these should be easy to fix if the people in the thread provide you their exact details, but if you donât want to fix them, then, people donât want to bother to get that detailed.
One reason to not want to fix such mistakes might be that itâs hard to do. Thereâs only one reason this could be the case. Maybe youâre using a basic text editor like notepad? If you grab vscode (itâs free) https://code.visualstudio.com/ you can do cool stuff like search a dozen text files at once, or even have vscode remember the names of key functions/variables for you to autocomplete on typing. It can do things like enforce/check whitespace rules in renpy (canât hit tab, have to hit spacebar, getâs annoying, vscode can do it for you.)
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Hi, I absolutely do want to fix the kind of mistakes like mixing too and two. The spell checker youâve recommended looks useful Iâll certainly check it out, so thanks for that. I do put effort into fixing any typos I can find, you guys should see it before itâs been checked⌠Struggles of a Dyslexic game dev Lol.
Speaking of spelling in one of your earlier scenes you mispelled exercise as excersize.
Absolutely loved the new update, left a more in deptu review on Patreon, might play through and review again lol.
2 immediate thoughts I wanna focus on though
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I adoooore Ashleigh and Alissa, and the baker pregnant girl is cute too as a feeder
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Butts look awesome in this game. No spoilers in THIS post, but the tanning option is nearly always my favorite on every pathway at the vacation cuz those asses look so good! My favorite is either the playerâs or Ashleighâs.
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Iâve been admiring your work for awhile now and I wanted to let you know I really love the game. I didnât at first, when it was just part 2 I think? The whole vacation chunk wasnât in there atleast. With the time skips amd everything I figured the gaining is too fast and theres not much to the game
I mean, you have a few scenes, choose an option and BAM next weight stage.
But now with chapter 4 I see the full picture, theres so much choice and so much variation, little differences, Its so much fun to replay and I enjoy that its a choice based game, not a grindy game,
I figured it would be linear and light choise based as all other games I played on here, but I was wrong, I like the pacing alot because that way its so much more fun to dive back in and try different things
I was confused woth Ashleigh tho, I chose a route where we didnât go back to the burger place but there was a scene where the MC talked about what happend last time, but I didnât take that route at all,
I do think the vacation scene could use one more activity, and that should be one with your roommate? Because most scenes remain semi the same theres ofcourse plenty varriations depending on everyones size, but an activity with your roommate based on your choices could be fun!
Iâm looking forward to seeing chapter 5!
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Oh yeah I forgot,
Alissa seems to be a girl whoâs very strict but loves food. It seems she was always skinny due to circumstances, because when she is around another character that loves food she canât resist. And eventually sheâll grow to enjoy being fed and well, growing, which is very interesting.
So my point being, I was thinking its kind of a waste to have the route of the MC gaining and Alissa staying thin being that short.
When she does grow fat its obvious she loves stuffing her face and clearly ends up enjoying being fat and growing fatter. So that desire has to be in there deep down even when sheâs skinny. What if you continue that arc? Have it so that she keeps you on the team because she will live out her desires through the MC? She wants to stay skinny and judgemental but seeing the MC grow makes her want to eat too but she doesnât sant to lose her figure so isntead lives out all her cravings through the MC? Great way to keep some âfat shamingâ content in there for those who are into that.
Just a suggestion! Eitherway I love this game!
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I actually agree here. I think the Alissa skinny arc could have been VERY fun with the humiliation/fat shaming. That said, I imagine it would be difficult to go back and implement now.
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It wouldnât be impossible to implement now, the advantage of having so many arcs is that there are still a couple when you get to Chapter four where the player is fat and Alissa is skinny. So that could still happen, Iâd just have to have a cross over of partners for a few scenes. Hopefully that makes sense. You guys are not the only ones whoâve asked for this so I think I should find a way to make this happen.
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My vote is for the Alissa skinny arc exploiting the MC into even more fatness.
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I donât really know how coding and stuff works, thats why Iâm just super grateful that thereâs people that just go for it and make these awesome games. It was only a suggestion because thereâs a lot of potential there and Iâm glad to hear many people think so too. The game also crashes when I get to that ending haha.
But I was wondering why its impossible to make that story longer? there are many arcs indeed where Alissa remains skinny, but thereâs more where she atleast gains a little weight. but if its too much work Iâm fine with it as many projects here seem to fail due to simply wanting too much.
You might turn into the guy from Bandersnatch! (a movie about a guy who wants to make a game where every choice branches out into a new story where he eventually goes insane because have too many options too many paths ends up in endlessly adding stuff)
but seriously its a great game, and if thereâs anyway to make that arc a bit longer it would be great, I really enjoy exploring her character. I think most of your characters are interesting to explore and I especially enjoy the different paths unlocking new dialogue and only by playing all of them do you truly understand the character. thats a very nice touch
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