He could expand the Alissa feeder side, he’d just have to find a sequence of events that gets her a bit fat to line up with the variations on part 4.
My honest guess as to why that wasn’t expanded on was just running out of inspiration/motivation for that story line. Also probably a desire to have it not end up as long as the Ashleigh line which was undoubtedly a ton of work.
The planning behind this is arguably the most difficult part since he’s working with multiple branching paths that all meet up at specific points. But the beauty to that is if desired he can create these one off paths that just lead to a fun little ending like the Alissa line currently is.
I’ve tried… Older versions of the novel I tried to package into a mobile release but I couldn’t get the Renpy mobile build distribution thing to work. Followed tutorials and everything, always got stuck at the end where you press the button to compile it into a mobile APK, but that button is just grey for me so pressing it did nothing. The other problem now is the game is over the 2GB limit that Renpy has to turn it into a mobile game, which means I would have to reduce the quality of the images. I would love to have a mobile release but that’s going to have to wait for now.
I didn’t realize you had actually tried to do it before, yeah man I’d say wait till its all finished up. Id try again later, if not ask around im sure someone on here would love to help.
Thanks for sharing that btw, i appreciate the work you do.
Yes it has, although I was waiting a couple days to work out any bugs before announcing it on here. But never mind, everyone might as well know. Chapter Five has been released, taking the image count to just over 2000 now.
Really loved Chapter 5, Excited that Chapter 6 will be the finale, there are many games on here that are so ambitious that it seems like they want the game to take many many many hours or the story long, this game is as long as it needs to be, love the different Path’s you can take, its very exciting. But once again I hope you will expand on the fat MC skinny Al story line as that one is way too short. IN fact due to the game only being 6 Chapters, I’m hoping you will keep building on what’s already there, very few WG games have a finished story and many just want to keep adding new things instead of building whats there.
I think there’s tons of fun to be had on expanding what’s already there adding more options and possibilities but that’s up to you ofcourse!
I’d be interested in hearing where you think a fat player skinny Al arc could go? I initially ended it early because I needed to stop the novel from becoming larger than I could manage. I thought it was the most realistic one to end as you’ve got this toned, super fit, judgemental sorority girl. And the player, a lazy glutton, it just was never going to work. That being said, so many people have asked for an extension to that arc, and it would be fun to do…
Personally, I’m fine with where it ended, but if people really want it and you think it’d be fun to do, I definitely won’t say no, lol, it’s more game! As for how it could go, I have a few ideas…
Firstly, let’s assume for simplicity’s sake that, as a story path that was hypothetically added after chapter 6 was finished, it’s just its own story path that can’t veer into any others at points (so basically there’s no point where you can get Alissa to start gaining, thus transitioning into the already existing mutual gain story.) You could do that, it 's just simpler for this pitch if I don’t factor those in. So for starters, the way to resolve the current end for the path would be that when Alissa tries to kick you off the team, she realizes that doing so would leave her with only three members, which isn’t enough for a squad, so they’d be disbanded. Or maybe her pride stops her from doing it because her fitness buddy getting so fat she had to be kicked off the squad would reflect badly on her. Either way, from that point on I see two options for where you could take the story: Alissa tries and fails to help the player lose weight or she slowly becomes a feeder. Either could work, imo. I think the path has enough scenes where Alissa is clearly enjoying feeding the player that it wouldn’t be surprising for her to become a feeder. Personally though, I think the former is more interesting. Similar to the skinny Rachel path, having your companion character be more antagonistic could be very promising. Plus, unlike Rachel who slowly treats the player more harshly as the friendship comes apart, Alissa doesn’t mince words from the start. She could be tough on the player, getting her up early to go to the gym, monitoring her diet, etc. But of course, this intensive weight gain prevention will require an even more intensive opposition. The player on the skinny Alissa path is already quite the glutton from the beginning, with the fridge raid and the ice cream machine, so it would make sense for her to ramp it up even more if Alissa is actively trying to get her to lose weight, getting into increasingly more ludicrous situations to get stuffed. I’m sure Ash would be glad to help, too! As for endings, I can see a few potential ones: Alissa finally accepts the player as she is and maybe becomes a feeder (not my fave), she eventually does just decide to kick the player off the team, OR Alissa herself quits the team out of sheer frustration (the best and funniest option, imo.)
Well you are right, it is more realistic so I do understand where the ending is coming from, it makes the most sense. Maybe that route is a route where everyone from the squad gets fat, so Alissa is kinda the only skinny one, which is what prevents her from kicking you since everyone is fat but her. Maybe she starts seeing the player as a dumpster, if the MC eats all the foods then maybe the rest of the squad will lose weight?
Maybe the story opens up a more personal reason why Alissa is so against fat and it can be an opposite to the skinny Rachel Fat MC route where Rachel grows more frustrated with the player and their friendship comes apart and with Alissa of all people you actually grow closer,
I don’t think I have the golden ticket idea for it just yet, I might think on it longer and if enough people suggest something too, there might be something in there, I just see a story potential there, but again first things first, like finishing the game! keep it up!
Is there any way I can buy this game without using patreon, this service is blocked in my country and in order to use it I have to pay a huge commission?
Thank you very much for your support, unfortunately none of the methods worked. However, I solved this problem by simply issuing a virtual American card. These 5 dollars are definitely worth it
Older versions of the novel I tried to package into a mobile release but I couldn’t get the Renpy mobile build distribution thing to work. Followed tutorials and everything, always got stuck at the end where you press the button to compile it into a mobile APK, but that button is just grey for me so pressing it did nothing. The other problem now is the game is over the 2GB limit that Renpy has to turn it into a mobile game, which means I would have to reduce the quality of the images. I would love to have a mobile release but that’s going to have to wait for now.