So, I’ve got a DeviantArt acc for quite a long time, and all that time I was enjoying pictures of this “small” community artists. A few weeks ago I decided that I want to join that party, and started working on my “style”(which is basic manga style, as my more proffesional mate said), characters designs and ideas.
So, I did a couple of drawings and want to receive some kind of critique or tips of how can I improve them, as I have a mid-size comix in my mind, and theese cutties are main heroines.
(And sure thing I will draw them at least not rarer than some kind of fanarts)
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A very nice place to start. I’d love to see more of them, pun fully intended!
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The only thing I see that was off to me was her right hands pinky having the full line through it making it feel disconnected but other than that It looks great in my opinion. 
mhm, understood, I kinda felt it so too, but this is one of the best variants I got, so I left it as it was
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Alright, ppl, first work is now available, you can check it out at my DA
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YOU ALL ARE FLIPPING MAD!
117 VIEWS FOR ONE EVENING, GEEZ, YOU ARE AMAZING!
For such a powerful feedback I drew yet another picture for yall. Enjoy:
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