Some of this is on me, took longer to write and I had less time to do it than I thought originally. Only really managed to get up until stage 3 dialogue done which in my defence was 15 separate events and about 40 pages of dialogue in about 9-10 days. I’m not the quickest writer though so the events did borrow from each other. A full version will be coming some time in the future and I will be doing my best to address a lot of those issues, like to lower the repetition with some new gameplay mechanics and Karrens dialogue will change as things progress although I cant promise she will be any less annoying 
But it should at least be more interesting.
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