Hi there! A few of you may recognize me from interactions on other’s projects (although I’ve been dormant for a good bit I will admit). Now I arrive with an offering of my own work, a chose your own text adventure game:
Vae’s Vast Venture!
- About sixty three thousand words
- A script one hundred and sixty two pages long
- Nearly a hundred unique sections
- Twelve unique endings
- Three Easter eggs
- Custom art by the talented Weightcomicguy
- Six months of my life I’ll never get back
Staring Vae, a young (in immortal terms) genie who needs to grant wishes in order to avoid an explosive fate. Of course, the wishes often don’t go smoothly either and often result in a variety of expansive consequences. Will you help the redheaded genie flourish over the course of three days or will you find yourself wishing you chose a different path? Click the link to the itch.io page to find out for yourself:
Vae’s Vast Ventures! (itch.io)
I’ve enjoyed a lot of projects people have made over here and I hope mine will be able to deliver the same feeling to you guys. I’m really interested to hear what you think of it from a writing and structural standpoint. I am a little nervous since this is my first time making something like this.
Have a few ideas for a sequel already, although I’ll need a good bit of time to recharge my batteries after this.
If you’re hankering for more, perhaps check out some of my written works on my DA:
https://www.deviantart.com/nopehome
Credits:
Director/writer/programmer:
Nopehome:
https://www.deviantart.com/nopehome
Artist/creative consultant:
https://www.deviantart.com/weightcomicguy
Proofreader/creative consultant:
https://www.deviantart.com/worstboid
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By the way, this is my first time doing anything of this sort so feedback is really valuable, I’d really love to read what anyone has to say
Wow it’s rare to see a completed game just drop ready to play. Can’t wait to try this out!
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Not bad… Yeah, just that. Nice idea with not much fetish moment, at least with those I want. Oh, there are also several text mistakes, like a absence of a space between words or a letter at the end of a sentence. Is it only me again or I dont see pictures when I should?
I tried to put a variety of fetish cintent in, although I doubt many people will like everything in there. Can you point out where the text errors and image failures are so I can potentially gis them? I’m probably going to do a small update fixing things so I would appreciate that.
Just didn’t feel right to put out a demo for something like this when the appeal is exploring all the different options
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Page Hello, small corner of the world
“Hi there, looks like ya got your hands full, don’t ya?” Vaebroke the ice by acknowledging the obvious.
That is all I found second time. Probably it happened because I switched text from English to other.
Pictures are missed everywhere.
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I’ll double check and fix it for the patch if its in there.
Images are only on certain pages. Is there like a torn picture icon where they should be for you?
Yes. And it’s not the first game, actually. I don’t know why but it’s common.
Hmmm… Sounds like it might be something on your end. I remember while making the game that there were some possible OS issues (I designed this for windows), so if your on a different OS, that might be it. Just making a best guess though.
I play with Windows. Strange thing btw, I just played it on my phone, and I HAVE pictures there. I also remember using the explore item (photo) function, when I clicked on the photo link (at least that’s what it looked like), the connection was interrupted. I suspect the difference between my PC and Phone that I use VPN on the last one.
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Glad you could play it on your phone at least. How’d you enjoy it narratively?
Pretty good. It’s fun that Vae can be nice, evil, or just having fun. And no, I didn’t play on phone, I just checked if pictures seem there. On the phone, the pictures just went off the screen, but on the computer there are no free VPNs.
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Depending on where the images are hosted certain internet connections can block access to them, so that’s probably the reason. Proton VPN has a free version on PC though, that might work for you.
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Just patched the game, nothing major:
Version 1.07:
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Fixed some spelling errors
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Fixed some capitalization errors
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Changed how karma endings are calculated slightly (Good and Bad endings are now slightly more common, very bad and very good are now slightly less so)
