The weight stat only works after you have been abducted, it seems.
Oh, and @Cordite and @FlabTepes are doing a great job proofreading, so I only have a couple other edit notes:
- “By the time the Terran Fleet got word of the attack on Farfarout and arrived to reinforce the defense, whatever had attacked the station was long gone. The Humans’ destroyers and corvettes that had been guarding the dwarf planet having been smashed to pieces.” Second sentence is a fragment–changing “having” to “have” is the quick fix.
- “(Species) sized” is an adjective, so I prefer it to be hyphenated (but this one is definitely your call).
- “There are multiple doorways, a lot of them have electronic locks that you’d probably never be able to open.” Run-on sentence–replacing “them” with “which” makes the second clause dependent, resolving the issue. (Some other sentences were run-ons, too, but they are very minor.)
- A couple of sentences that describe you hanging out with the Maintenance team are missing a ending punctuation mark (period). Same for one of the treadmill experiments (“several minutes”).
- Missing space (“Fridge.Even”) in Dr. Halessie’s unexpected visit while watching TV.
- Duplicate word: “Your gut covers the top half of your thighs like a meaty apron now, and your Your moobs are starting to sag.”
P.S. The “eating the apple” mini-event took me longer to understand than it should have, but yeah, that was clever–dumb clever, but clever.