Wow, what an amazing game it was!! I started playing it last night and then finished it a couple hours ago. One of the greatest text-based feedism games, fr. Tiffany is that type of character you’d wanna hug and tell them that everything is gonna be ok. Zella was quite interesting too, we didn’t get much of her but i loved how all the endings differed with her. i was able to visualise her quite well, a tall dominant woman with abs. seriously, you’ve done a great job with these two, there’s potential for character analysis on them. i adored the random encounters of Tiff’s past we got sometimes, it really added a lot to her character and what sort of person she is. the weight gain was very realistic too, like the largest size was around 400 lbs. i really dislike it when they give emphasis to extreme sizes in these games, like i get it it’s just not my cup of tea, but like come on how can a 600 lbs person manage to walk many distances and beat enemies and achieve anything in general? this game was amazing for that. what added to this was the more richer themes and ideas too, ranging from body dysmorphia to sadomasochism and abuse and many others. games with darker tones like this are truly better, because they reveal more of the person and the human that we’re playing as/seeing. really made the game more realistic, and a well-rounded one, pun intended lmao.
before getting into the gritty of the stats and endings, let me just say: i’m SO glad you didn’t use AI slop!! i saw your comment that it’d lessen the game and visualising characters works better, and yea i wholeheartedly agree. like yes seeing things would be good, but the power of the mind is always better.
the way the game worked with the three stats and how things changed was really the best thing. after seeing the different endings and comparing the one stat endings to the two stat ones, i could really see how things have ended up in that way. like, if Tiff wasn’t fat enough, Zella didn’t have the drive to explore that emotion inside of her, so she either left her or told her to lose weight because it was bad for her. but if she HAD that drive, aka a substantial weight gain or a single-minded obsession that teetered on the edge of sadomasochism, then she would explore that sensation she felt.
i always returned back and chose different things, wondering what the ending would be. and they didn’t disappoint AT ALL. each were unique in and of themselves, even though most of them were similar!! my favourite endings are the ones where Tiff and Zella are together, either as a couple and/or a master-slave & feeder-feedee relationship. my theory is that weight gain is a sign of improvement for Tiff, she actively enjoys stuffing herself and even says that she’d do this even without Zella. and most of the endings reflect this, the ones where she’s happy and with Zella in one way or another are the ones where she’s at least obese. but there are exceptions to that. the first ending where they’re only friends, and the submission ending where she goes to therapy. but even in those ones, she’s not ‘actively’ losing weight, but more so becoming content and doing what she wants. and that just so happens to be eating food and enjoying her little pot belly.
my favourite endings were the ones i pointed above, where they are together and she’s actively gaining. it’s a sign of improvement, of better times for her. i think one stands out though, i think the ‘teacher’s pet’ ending where Zella also starts to gain. i do have a soft spot for mutual gain, and seeing this dominant master woman with abs let go a bit, was awesome. but i was left wanting more. i feel like that ending would be stronger if Zella was already chubby by that time - like yea you do allude to her weight gain, but it’s more so of a thing of the future. if she was already kinda chubby and u went into detail of how fat as accumulated on her body from Tiff’s POV, that’d strengthen that ending, imo.
the endings i didn’t like/hated were the obsession and submissiveness ones. obsession ones were quite sad and you can see how that ended up happening, the bits i pointed above with Zella not having the drive to explore these sensations. that one obsession ending with welfare was like very sad, poor girl. the submissiveness endings i just hated, because Tiff was losing weight. now don’t get me wrong, losing weight in a weight gain game is not the worst thing lmao, but i actively saw how she wasn’t living her life to her fullest with that. she wasn’t truly happy, and was doing what she could to stay happy. she’s actively avoiding food, her relationship with Zella ain’t the best without the additional chub and sex drive. sometimes she even hated herself for abandoning her mukbang career. don’t get me wrong i really appreciated these endings as it adds realism and gravity, but it just left a sour taste in my mouth after seeing Tiff not be as happy as some of the other endings.
i guess one thing that could be better could be the descriptions of Tiff’s growing body. there are some paragraphs and i really adore them, but i think it could’ve been in greater detail. especially for the gluttony endings where the focus is more on her body. i loved that camgirl ending where she spills chocolate over her - that wee detail of her belly button was great, and i was left for more. as you can tell, i’m a sucker for belly buttons lmao, and i feel like i’m underappreciated in this community! but even aside from that, small details like not being able to see your feet, clothes not fitting as great, bumping onto stuff - they could really enrich this game further, in my opinion.
in addition, maybe describing how the characters look could be good too, i feel like they’re too vague this way. i didn’t really have a solid sense of how Tiff looked like, and Zella either besides her abs and height. i think u could do a good job describing Zella from Tiff’s POV as some sort of a goddess, but also describe herself in a way that shows she hates yourself, and that it’s clearly not true at all.
yea i really enjoyed this game! i’m personally writing a novel/novel series set in a dark fantasy world, and at one point the protagonist - my oc - gets fat. the bits in this game where Zella has that sensation within her and wants to explore Tiff’s body as well as this emotion were really inspirational for me, i’ll most definitely incorporate similar stuff into my writing! thank you so much for this game, i really enjoyed it and it really added a lot.
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