Modern Gains?

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i look forward to your upcoming work no matter what you decide to do i like the words and progression youve got going on

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this was a really fun game! cant wait to see more!

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Game is great, really like this sort of thing. Would love if you continued it, and add the things you mention e.g. Park interactions, the Spa etc.

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im still excited to see what happens here i hope everything is going well

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I still come back to this game because i love the concept, hope you’re doing well!

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is there any way we can help support you?

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Fun to play, I cant wait for more!

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I enjoyed this a fair bit. A few small bug fixes:

  1. In the “Rest” passage", two of the scenarios aren’t triggered due to the random variable not having a wide enough range. I’d suggest replacing the “5” with “7”, or, better, declaring a local variable _numOpts or something like that.
<<set $RE to Math.floor((Math.random() * 7) + 1)>>

Stylistically, I’d also use <<else>> on the last clause.

  1. $bossgain needs to be added to the StoryInit passage.

  2. In the BakeJob passage, “==” should be “=” (since we’re assigning true to the $bake_job variable):

<<set $bake_job = true>>
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Great stuff. I have some ideas to offer:

  1. How about an event with the theme “piggy worker”? Like, you get a job in office or caffi, gain some weight and your boss wants you to become his “pig” or something like that. Or like this: Elaina - The Country of Quick Cuisine by Orristerioso on DeviantArt
  2. Different text if have some weight.
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If anyone wants to fix the bakery work event, just inspect or edit the page and change <<set $bake_job == true>> to <<set $bake_job to true>> in the “BakeJob” tw-passagedata.

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