This is my first Twine game and i have been making it since 2 days ago and I haven’t added much dialogue yet minus character choosing and 1 Room out of 1100 since you get 10 choices at the start and you get 9 more rooms with that number going down with each Room visited to go plus a ending room which causes bad ends if visited before and each room is visited once per story so a total of 1110 rooms, with stories linked to body type chosen in the character choosing part and each room being visited and I will be sure to release a V0.1 by the time i at least finish the first set of stories since I have to set up about 1110 stories 100 per Room chosen at the start, the game has high gay content and sexual content so I put disclaimers when choosing sexuality for the character where it warns Straights and Asexuals saying no results in a Bad End which I worded to make it sound like an insultive joke for the Straights but less insultive for Asexuals and the Insultive jokes are only to lighten the mood because I tried to word it like a joke so it didn’t come off as completely insultive because I was trying to make those Bad Ends funny even if they seem insultive but I am not sure so I can post those here for feedback so if it should change them before V0.1 I can change them: “You gave up because you are Straight and Homophobic!” that’s the Straight Bad End, the Asexual Bad End isn’t insultive at least I don’t believe so “You gave up because of the possibility of sexual content.” the Straight Bad End isn’t supposed to be taken as an insult as its supposed to be a joke that sounds like an insult, I’m bad at insults and even worse at mixing an insult and a joke there is another Bad End but that’s just when trying to select Female at the start which causes “Sorry but this is Male only.” to be shown followed by “You Lost”. If anyone wants to give me some feedback feel free since this is the first time I am releasing a game publicly when I initially started making it for myself. V0.1 will be one start Room finished with each 0.# following being how many Room lines I have finished so far I’d say I’m at V0.00000000001 since I only finished the first room choice’s Room 1, there are 10 rooms plus 10 characters, each character has his own body type associated with him at the start such as Kurt the Skinny, Henry the Average, Anthony the Chubby, Taylor the Obese, David the Toned, Paul the Athletic, James the Bodybuilder, Robert ‘Bob’ the Muscle Chub, Mark the Ex-Jock and Greg the Bones those are just default names, as the Player you are called by “the [Body Type chosen]” with Kurt, Henry, David, Paul, James, Robert ‘Bob’ and Greg just being the names I came up with at the time with Anthony and Taylor being my ocs Taylor being a me with a better live and Anthony being his now fiancé but in the game they are in a secret relationship unlike the others where Kurt & Henry, David & Paul, James & Bob and Mark & Greg have mutual crushes that they aren’t aware of, while Mark is a friend of mine who asked to be put in my next game and I told him that in the game he would have a crush on a guy who would is so thin that his bones are really pronounced hence why Greg’s called “the Bones” while Kurt has a higher chance of survival Greg is close to death because he is dangerously underweight and Mark was like if he met a guy named Greg who was in that predicament he would force feed him so he wouldn’t die and start making out with him while he tries to digest the food and Mark said that he wouldn’t care if the Greg guy was gay or not though knowing Mark he’d probably be able to convince a straight guy to make Mark his sex slave… Sorry got off topic there because I was talking about the background behind the names then I started talking about my friend Mark. As a little spoiler I am including a story passage, not that long since I wasn’t sure how exactly to word it so I could go into details on how the voreing/voring happened since I usually watch or look at vore I don’t read it since my imagination doesn’t allow me to envision exactly what is being said my imagination makes it more sexual than it needs to be… before I get anymore side tracked I will add the screenshot.Human Growth Screenshot|690x255 the Screenshot is a Story passage from my Better Me’s story aka “the Obese”'s story
Here is the V0.1 release though technically V0.1.1 since I made a mistake and decided to fix it.