You’ve said this a number of times, but I’ve never really felt it. What would happen to Emmie in that case?
I guess there could be something along the lines of some power remaining in her, but it’d require a kind of awkward narrative explanation, we’d be left with two identical roles in the party which would feel kind of redundant, and there’d need to be something holding ETV back from accruing massive power on her own and outclassing the party entirely.
It’s just something I don’t see happening except maybe ceremonially for like the last fight or something. What seems more likely to me is other logistical issues with the vessel creation cropping up over and over until the narrative climax.
Behold, proof of my hard work and dedication, all 59 pages of them. With that being said however, I’ve realized that working on something of this magnitude requires more than a few days for each chapter, so I’ve come to a sort of roadmap regarding this project. I’ve set myself on a plan to push out two chapters each month, all within separate google doc files under a single category called “Lantrum”. This way, I won’t have to re-edit previous docs and lag the hell out of my computer. By the end of the month I’ll have Chapter 2 (Schalenhafen) ready, so look forward to that when I post it. In the meantime, enjoy this 59 page snippet of what you can expect from me and this Lantrum novel.
P.S. Message me any problems or criticisms you have with the novel. There’s already multiple altered events present in this chapter (and prologue) so I’m hoping to get feedback on what people think of them. You can be as harsh and blunt as possible, all criticism will be valid and be taken into account as the novelization goes on.
Holy shit, I havent read this yet, but I already love it. I was thinking of a comic version of SBS but I dont have either the drawing skills nor the motivation to make it.
Also, I made this account solely to comment on this thread and say:
This game.
Love this game.
Seriously, it’s gotten to the point where I’m playing it less for the fetish stuff and more for the story and characters, ESPECIALLY the characters. Theyre so well-written, I dunno if there’s a single character below B-tier in my book. (Maybe I’ll make a tier list some time but im too lazy now and there’s something else SBS I wanna make first.) (Also Eloa best girl, holy fuck I love her.)
One last thing, is there gonna be a 4th party member at some point? I figured we were too late into the game into the game to introduce another party member. The reason I ask is I’m planning on making a poll for 4th party member predictions. If there isnt gonna be one then the poll’ll just be who people would want the most as a 4th Party member.
Sorry for the essay, I just wanted to gush about this game for a bit, unironically one of the most fun I’ve had playing a game in a long time. I’ve been following it’s development since before the Vacation Cruse Update, and its soo cool to see how far it’s come.
Okay, silly question. But the game keeps insisting that I can, at some point, get into that sparkly window in the capital, but I am just not seeing how.
Is it something I can do later or am I just being dumb?
Hey I have been reading it, is there any way of changing the font you’re using? I mean it looks really good for titles and that, but when reading paragraphs upon paragraphs, it’s kinda hard, btw, great job, I’m really enjoying reading it
Around three quarters of the way through writing the first chapter I began to realize that the font I chose was a little disorientating. I tried to highlight all my paragraphs in order to change the font but the process took forever. I’ll look into changing it if that’ll help you guys read it better.
Edit: Changed the font to Georgia. Let me know if it’s better or worse.
I don’t believe that it’s been implemented yet, it’s been mentioned a couple of times in this thread, and so far I haven’t seen an update regarding said sparkly window
Other way around! The game is joking that you cant get it, because there is nothing there. Seriously though, it’s just a empty event, supposed to be a joke that just because something is flashing the player wants to interact with it.
why not make it a stupidly useless item, that is actually the key to a secret ending, involving pro and RPG logic where his home is just full of useless garbage
Why thank you very much. I wasn’t sure how those sections would be received so I’m glad you enjoyed them. If you have any nitpicks or criticisms with how it’s written, express them. I’d love to know any problems you or others have with how I’m writing so that I can make for a more enjoyable reading experience.
The only nitpick I have is that there are a few Grammar errors on occasions, but those don’t really impact the overall story.
That being said, perhaps consider a program to help minimize the grammar errors, like for example, Grammarly. I tend to use it so that I can spot errors during writing.
Regardless, I’m looking forward to seeing how the rest goes along.
