Thank you for the suggestion, I’ll take note of that for future reference. And in terms of grammar, I’m actively skimming through the pages to fix any mistakes, so once I’ve finished with that, Chapter 2 will be out in no time.
I love your writing,looking forward to your next chapter.
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And can you add the gluttony route,when Pro defeat Markus,Emmie eat all of the fish.
While the story is mostly going to lean towards the pure route (mostly because that’s my personal preference in terms of the story of Some Bullshit), I will occasionally add some events from the Gluttony route into the story. If possible, I’ll also try and combine aspects of both Gluttony and Pure route events if I can as a means to please both sides. But other than that, I apologize but, I don’t see the point in going back to an event in Chapter 1 and altering it completely. It’ll just take time away from writing the second chapter and be a complete waste of time should I do it for each individual event where options pop up. I hope you understand where I’m coming from.
I think you can save before you need to choose gluttony route or pure route,so you can write two routes.
I believe they’re referring to the fact that Chapter 1 is already done, and there’s no point in returning to edit one part of the story. They made their choice in which route they went with, so we should respect their decision and let them work on it as they please.
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I know,so I try to write another route by myself,well in Chinese,but I think he can save before make the choice so he can write two routes when he write following chapters.
it took me so long to find this, Im currently at the secret occult meeting and i cant get past the fight after pro rejoins the party, is there a way to beat it cause i have spent a week with no luck?
I am a bit confused as to which fight you are referring to. What exact area are you in? If you have Emmie in your party its kinda hard to lose a fight…
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Hello!
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Shortly after Clara joins the group, they go into the sewers to rescue the vip from the castle and reach a meeting sneaking to the cells where pro and the princess are shortly pro starts a fight with the cult
what part of the fight is giving you trouble? if i recall correctly that fight is similar to the assassin fight in bierbrunnan just with more henchmen.
Are there any walk-throughs or guides for the game? I feel like I missed a few scenes after going through the memories section and the image folder.
Is there a discord for the game?
Every time I try to fight they end up ko’ing my party members and when I revive them they get ko’ed before there next action plus I have a lack of items
I have finished writing the gluttony route,I’ll post it on the forum,do you mind giving some suggestion?Maybe my writing is a little bad.
Emmie’s mouth was practically a waterfall at this point. As she reached for one of the fish in her hands started shaking as if it were cold. She was just inches away from laying her fingers upon the delicious food in front of her.“All right,have a little fish doesn’t matter.”Emmie tries to persuade herself.She picks up a salty fish from the box,bites it carefully,she doesn’t want to get hurt by the fish bone.Salty fish can be stored for longer time,also provide a distinctive flavour.“Amazing!”Emmie feels like she can eat more!She can’t wait to taste another fish,like she did before,she eats up the fish,and put fish bone aside.Emmie’s belly inflates as those fish falls through her gullet,she swallows those fish mechanically.The more fish Emmie eats,the more she wants,her appetite is unlimited!As the time pass by,her belly is too big for her shirt to cover!
Pro heads to the logging master after he leave the forest,and lead him to the place where those bandit store food.To Pro’s surprise,these boxes are empty!The logging master get shocked,“Oh no,its as I feared,The bandit just destroyed the food instead of saving it.They probably thought the fish would go bad.”However,Pro has a clue that who would do this.He agrees with the logging master and says,“Yes,that is what happened,Markus must be lying to save his hide!”The logging master tries to comfort Pro,“Good thing I prepared for this by having the men continue to work.We can sell the the new wood for food.With the gate open,we can be stocked up by nightfall.”Pro nods his head.“You go back and get that ready,I left my ward around here to see if she could find any other supplies.Good luck.”
The logging master hands a leather jacket to Pro,“Ah,don’t forget your reward!We have starved without you.”Pro take the clothes and put on.“You are too kind.”
As the logging master departs from the forest,Pro proceeds to the Markus’s tent,he has a premonitory that Emmie did this,but he still doubt it.When he is close to the tent,a huge burp can be heard from the tent,and Pro knows that sound is from Emmie,“She did it!”
Pro gets into the tent,he finds Emmie is sitting on the bed,her belly looks like she is pregnant with triplet.The buttons pop out and her skirt tears,her stuffed belly looks like a huge white pearl and it exposes into the air.Emmie rubs her soft tummy for making her stomach digest the food more quickly.Her legs with pantyhose are kicking in the air constantly because of the stomache.At the same time,Emmie is mumbling to herself, “Ooooh,my tummy hurts.”Pro walks forward and Emmie notices that,she tries to greet Pro,“Hi,ugh,Pro.”Pro looks annoyed,He questions Emmie,“So,want to explain what happened.”Emmie attempts to pretend that she is innocent, “Explain what?” Emmie’s word aggravates Pro,he emphasizes his word, “the fish the bandit stole,they are all gone!”Emmie still want to cover up what she did,“Who,who would···Buuuuurp!”A huge bulge interrupts her word,Emmie’s face blushed, “Excuse me,I said who would do this.”Pro stares at Emmie,he make his effort to calm himself down. “You are lucky the villagers had a backup plan.At least you are full now.Let’s move on the Schalehafen and get off the island.”
Emmie learned that sometimes you don’t need to wait.Also her stomach is better suited to faster digestion.
Before they leave,Emmie remind Pro of the note, “There’s a note there on his desk. Might be cool.”
With the mention of a note, Pro looked over at Markus’ desk and indeed found a written letter. He picked it up and read it out loud.
“Make sure you cause havoc, this island needs to be destabilized” - EL
“Who’s EL?” replied Emmie.
“I don’t know,” responded Pro, “But either way this “EL” character has some sort of ties to the bandits. It’s possible they’re the one who sent Markus here.”
Making it outside of the clearing, past the Chipmunks’ former base and past the still unconscious bodies of Thad and Chad, they made their way out of the west woods and made their way into Schalehafen.
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excuse me… the update 12.5 is already ready for download? i see a guy in a segment where someone give a massage to emmi and clara and i never see that before
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That would have been ver 10.5/10.6 ish.
That has been out for some time! Head to the bathhouse in Azh Rabot and you too can get the massage. It is repeatable!
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